Does Catamount pass the 'bad character detector test'
[ ] They are super powerful/invincible/invulnerable/immortal.
[*] They have a rare or unusual scale colour. (Catamount is described as a unusual pale colour)
[ ] They are a colour/have a pattern usually reserved for special dragons (like they have blue eyes/copper scales as a skywing but aren't a firescales/have royal seawing starbursts but aren't royal)
[*] Their eyes are an unusual colour. (He has green eyes thanks to his combustion scales)
[ ] This happens to be red.
[ ] Their eyes change colour (skip if Rainwing given that's an ability of theirs)
[ ] They can shapeshift into other tribes.
[ ] They are a hybrid.
[ ] They are a tribrid/more than three tribes.
[ ] [If female] She is extremely pretty and their appearance is described as either 'dazzling, gorgeous, or stunning'
[ ] [If male] He is extremely handsome and their appearance is described as either 'handsome, striking, or attractive'
[*] They look far younger or far older than they actually are. (Due to his size he's usually mistaken for being older than he actually is, while he's nine he looks like he could fifteen or older)
[ ] They are incredibly attractive to only the same gender.
[ ] They are incredibly attractive to only the opposite gender.
[*] They have an animus enchanted object yet is not an animus, and are fully aware of what it does. (Catamount has a stash of animus enchanted objects gifted to him by his mentor Everglade, they are limited to just the Power Tower at his Academy, and help him train dragonets.)
[ ] They have mind reading/future vision when they are not a nightwing/or if they are a nightwing from before the Nightwing Exodus took place.
[ ] They reuse a cannon event (for example they are Scarlet's champion or also have moon powers before the Nightwing Exodus because their parent also hid them inside the rainforest)
[*] They have some kind of other non-cannon power. (his combustionscales)
[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they aren't aware of it at the moment/until a much later time from their current moment.
[*] They are cursed with these powers/believe they are cursed. (As a dragonet he throughly believed he was cursed.)
[ ] They were gifted/bestowed their powers by another.
[ ] They're an animus dragon.
[ ] If they are an animus dragon, they can't lose their soul.
[*] They are healer/have more than just basic first aid knowledge. (Between learning a series of skills from a doctor named Ether, he had a doctor in Possibility teach him all they knew so he could treat dragonets at his school if they got injured.)
[*] They are an extremely good fighter. (Using his combustionscales powers he can disarm most dragons instantly should it come to blows.)
[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family.
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background.
[ ] Their parents were a forbidden romance.
[ ] They are targeted because of their parents forbidden romance.
[ ]They have lost one/both of their parents.
[*]Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc. (After he gained his powers, not only was he shun by them, his father attempted to kill him by dropping him off a cliff despite the fact that the anti power skywing law had been removed.)
[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's deaths.
[ ] They never knew their parents.
[*] They were abused/spoiled as a child. (Catamount's dragonethood was pretty dark and he faced a lot of hatred and anger because of his dangerous powers.)
[ ] They were adopted by royalty.
[ ] They are related to canon characters/adopted by canon characters.
[ ] They have a lot of scars or disfigurements.
[*] They have either +5 friends of no friends at all. (Catamount is friends with his fellow teachers at the CoCA Academy, as well as the two mail dragons that deliver too and from the school.)
[*] They have a mentor figure. (Everglade helped Catamount not only control his powers, but find peace and faith within himself. Everglade is one of the main reasons why Catamount did not become a villainous character.)
[*] They deem this mentor figure their parental figure because their actual parents are abusive/dead. (Seeing as Catamount was quite young when Everglade took him in, he cane to see him as a father like figure.)
[ ] They are currently in a relationship.
[ ] They have been divorced/or they broke up/were broken up with.
[ ] They have/are been in an abusive relationship.
[ ] They have a crush/are in a relationship with a cannon character.
[ ] Everyone likes/are neutral with them right away.
[ ] Everyone has a crush on them/often immediately fall for them.
[ ] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[*] They have a mental disorder. (Catamount has persistant depression, though is extremely good at hiding it from others. Still, those who are around him long enough notice he tends to spend all his free time sleeping and even has problems loving himself or overall liking himself. His disorder was much worse when he was younger though, and he can manage himself pretty well.)
[ ] They have an emotional disorder.
[ ] They struggle to stay sane.
[ ] They are a psychopath/sociopath.
[ ] They have killed many dragons.
[ ] They have multiple personalities.
[* ] They are very intelligent. (Catamount's hobby is discovery, and thus he does a lot of reading.)
[ ] They have hallucinations.
[ ] They have an unrealistic/unusual pet. (Unrealistic would be like a talking scavenger or a talking sloth)
[*] Some of their body glows (Not counting Seawing bioluminescent spots) (His eyes and talons will glow when his powers are active.)
[ ] They have an unusual name that doesn't fit their tribe.
[ ] They can talk to/and or see the dead.(via non animus related means)
[ ] They can talk to animals that aren't dragons (via non animus related means)
[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at hatching.
[ ] They are hiding from someone/something.
[ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[ ] They are from a different continent from where they currently live.
[ ] They are very mysterious/dark.
[ ] They are always depressed and pessimistic.
[ ] They are very lively/happy.
[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly.
[* ] They are very patient. (He doesn't really have a choice, as getting worked up makes his powers unstable.)
[ ] They are from a long line of (insert profession/power here)
[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear.
[ ] This item happens to be animus enchanted.
[ ] They have amnesia.
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition.
[ ] They have a curse upon them.
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy.
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'
[ ] They are 'the last of their kind'
[ ] They have a little cabin in the woods/live alone in the woods.
[ ] They have insomnia.
[ ] They are emotionless.
[ ] They have a natural talent/skill.
Overall Points: 17
Point Reductions!! Take off one point off your OC's overall score for each applicable statement:
[ ] They are incapable of fighting (not because of morals, they're just bad at it)
[ ] They are an alcoholic (taverns have been confirmed to exist in the Wings of Fire world)
[ ] They are over/under weight.
[ ] They have a short temper/no patience whatsoever.
[ ] They have no wings/damaged wings and are unable to fly (does not apply to silkwing dragonets)
[ ] They have below average intelligence/they're an idiot.
[ ] They had/have loving caring/average parents.
[ ] They enjoy bullying/harming others.
[ ] They do not care much about others.
[ ] They lack an ability that the rest of their tribe/tribes have.
[* ] They don't have a weapon and it's not because they don't have access to one.
[*] They are poor. (Technically he's dirt poor given he's spent every bit of wealth he had on his school, even than most of it was funded to him by Queen Ruby.)
[ ] They are a hybrid (or more) and completely lack all abilities from both/all their tribes.
Final Score is: 15
<5 -Anti-Sue
6-20 -Balanced Character
21-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue/Gary Stu
26< -Mary-Sue/Gary Stu
Tadaaaaa, he's balanced :D
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