In case you don't know what the worst fanfic is. It's a multiple chapter fanfiction based off the Harry Potter story. The name of this particular story is My Immortal. I would suggest NOT reading that unholy piece of... Look, if you can't stand "Goffs" or horrid writing; then you would have nightmares after reading that monstrosity. But if you do want to go and read it, keep a box of kittens close by. Then you might also want to check yourself into a mental hospital for doing something as stupid as reading My Immortal. But anyways, the reason I'm writing this is so no one can repeat the mistake. And that means I will go over the character design of "Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way." Ho boy, this is gonna be good.

Yeah, I'm just going to start with "Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way"'s design. I think the name of that beast is a good place to start. Look, for one, the name is too long. But the only reason Authors put the name of the characters long and stupid and not even using actual names is because it's a way to help describe the character. But if I did that to one of my OCs, it would be "Brunette That-Wants-To-Kill-Everyone-And-Rule-The-Fucking-World Chubby Straightest-Lesbian-You'll-Ever-Meet Self-Made-Insomniac Fucking Weirdo." That particular OC's real name is Sam Gallowsman, if you really want to know. So when you name a OC, name it with a real name UNLESS it's not a humanoid. Trolls can not be named Suzy either. Now let's go over the overall look. "I'm not a whore!" says the gothic whore. Now I don't like to put people into boxes just because of what they wear. But that is literally how people are built, to judge people by their looks. That is how every fucking animal picks their mate. Well most, but I haven't heard of a animal who doesn't. But hey, I'm more likely to judge OCs by the way the are put out by their creator. Example, if a OC is put out there and the spelling is horrible; I instantly don't like them. But if the words they get wrong are already really hard words, I let it pass. But if a OC is put out with nice neat writing and alot of work is obviously put into it, I am more likely to like it. If you want to have more people like your OC, put them out in a somewhat nice way. Oh and I just thought of a joke about Ebony's name. But I don't want to be to mean since the creator only added words that sounded cool, so I won't say it... I'M GOING TO NEED DEMENTIA AFTER READING THIS BULLSHIT. Oh what? I didn't say anything.

Next up is the grammar and the spelling. Oh god, I lost most of my brain cells after reading that shit. I had better grammar when I was in third grade, and I often forgot to put in whole sentences that are really important. And the spelling! Why? From what corner of hell did that come from? Oh me gerd? The author spelled most of her words wrong, including the main characters' names. Not kidding. I swear to every God ever created, that monstrosity needs to be PURGED WITH FIRE. And what's worse is the author was eleven when she wrote My Immortal. 1; that damned story has sex scenes, which is really just "He put his you-know-what in my you-know-what". I don't know if that counts, but I guess it does due to the implications of sex. 2; When I was eleven, I could write ten times better. 3; But I need to keep in mind, I knew about the birds and the bees since I was like four or five, so I could say penis and vagina just fine. Though now that I think about, I did get weird looks from my teachers alot... Either way! The spelling and the grammar of the story put together just make me want to commit Seppuku. If you don't know what that is, look it up. And one last thing, I couldn't write like that even if I was drunk and actually was trying.

Now I don't want to go on about this for that long. So I have one more thing to say. In the story, the author says "Gays are so hot." and she also said "The girls turn bisemexual for me and Vampire (Harry Potter) is also bisemexual, cause it's so hot" I'm going to say this, it's nice to have some representation. But definitely not in the way it's put out. I am actually Bisexual, not bisemexual, and I know you can not chose your sexuality, nor your gender. If I could chose on what I'm like, I would be a stereotypical cis-female. You can not chose to be gay, or lesbian, Bisexual, asexual, demisexual, Pansexual, omnisexual, etc. The author is just glorifying and misinterpreting Sexuality. Now I know I may sound like a raging feminist, but it is true. It is fine to have LGBT+ OCs, except if it's just because it's hot. So please, stop.

So have a nice day/morning/afternoon/night where ever you are.