LT Review
LT is a character who belongs to CinnamonRollShadow. LT is also supposed to be a character from a fantasy story, with like werewolves and other cool things. So my thoughts on the character are going to be in bold and separate to the actual bio.
Name: LT
My first thought was BLT, because I'm always hungry. Though I'm thinking it stands for something and LT is just a nickname. If it is you should write it as (First Name) LT (Middle and/or last name).
Age: 18
He's legal!
Race: Wolfboy, half-breed through magiki
Since I don't know what magiki is, I'm not going to go off about genetics. Though my question is since he's half Wolfboy, does he have a wolf penis?
In Which Fandom?: None
Which I easily like. Characters who don't revolve around a certain Fandom usually are better. Not all the time though.
Height: 7'8"
Damn! That is actually a little too big, like right now, the tallest man living is 8ft and he's also 55 right now. So I would really hate to see him full grown. Plus, his forehead might get bruised alot because the average door frame 6'8"
Weight: 430
Pounds? Because I don't know what your using, but that's super heavy.
Body Color: Paleish, but somewhat tan
How does that work? Maybe he's tan in some places and pale in others.
Eye Color: Sea blue
Actually I would say it's a brown, since most brown wolves have brown eyes.
Hair Color/style: A messy brown
Like messy how? Like he doesn't comb it, or its really curly and just looks messy?
Abnormalities/disabilities (both physical and mental): He is very strong and his necklace harvests a magic that lets him channel his emotion of anxiety inside him, churning it into energy.
Powers: His body is large in size due to the fact before he was placed through magic, he was a dire wolf pup, resultingin his size mirroring a wolf
Well I was meaning towards like they're mute, blind, or had a mental disorder. But this is actually really important to know.
In any romantic relationships, and with whom?: He has a boyfriend named Rin
Gay?! And part Werewolf?! Wait I'll get my brother!... Oh wait LT's taken.
Friends: RavenWood, Web, King Leo, and Nightingale
Don't know 'em, but I already have a good idea what they're like. RavenWood is the leader who is energetic, Nightingale is the team emo, King Leo is full of himself, and Web likes Spiders.
Allies: RavenWood, Web, King Leo, and Nightingale
I'm also guessing that these four are his team he goes adventure on. However, I think you should add more characters are create rivalries in the team.
Enemies: The Blood Prince, Scabby, Dakota
I have a feeling all of them are uppity.
Nemesis(es): The Blood Prince, Scabby, Dakota
Also, are they the people he's fighting?
Theme Song: I will not bow
Actually, good song. I'm guessing he's stubborn and goes against authority alot.
Backstory: [Had not been given yet]
Please, I want the Backstory. I think LT sounds cool, so I want to know his Backstory so I can find out what he acts like.
My thoughts: He's a little under developed, but I actually really like him. I would like the Backstory, but I do understand if you don't want to tell it, since you were squeamish about telling me and then not telling me at all. But keep in mind that people who are stuck together often start to fight, which between siblings, that's called 'Sibling Rivalry'. And sadly, Wattpad is a asshole so I had to type everything onto the template. So I left somethings out, because I'm lazy. But back to character, I give him a 8.5/10.
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