Miss CEO: by anytypeoffood

Remember, these are just my opinions, and feel free to argue with or agree with any points I make.

Welp, my last review for a while. 

A One D fic. So, since I'm a fully grown adult, and haven't listened to 1D in a really long time, or read a single piece of 1D fic, take this review how you will.

Er, so the first thing I notice is there is some grammatical errors. The biggest one was that there was no spaces after basically all comma's. That's kinda a basic thing, and can be fixed pretty easily. 

The other thing is that there is no comma after dialogue that doesn't end in an action. For example, "I'm Katherine." She replied, needs to be "I'm Katherine," she replied.

I guess the overall story was alright. Plot wise, I mean, the same structure I'm sure all chiclit's and 1D fic's are done. Nothing to crazy or wild. Just a normal dude being noticed by a millionaire at his job. And Harry Styles. 

The intro was fine, the spelling was correct.  Overall it was fine.

Summary:

Pros:

Good spelling.

Good introduction.

Cons:

Grammatical errors

 So, if you want another story of One Direction (in memory of the band that no longer exists), then go over to Miss CEO. And that CEO will wow your socks off.