Is It Too Much To Ask For Your Heart by: edara1999

Remember these are just my opinions. Feel free to argue with or disagree with any points I make.

Hey there Edara. Look, this is going to be a short review. Really, I think your overall story was good. I didn't see any grammatical errors, no spacing issues, the pacing felt fine. I liked the characters, thought they were written out very well. It was pretty clear what type of story you were your trying to write, and I don't think much needs to change. My first issue is though the chapters are kinda short. I don't know if that's just how you like the format of the story, but each chapter kinda felt like snippets of something whole.

The other thing is I'm honestly just confused as to what the actually setting of the story is. Maybe I missed it, but I don't really get a good idea what the setting is just from reading the chapters. I don't know, I guess I might have missed something.

So, yeah. I got nothing else. If there were specific questions you wanted me to answer, feel free to ask.

Summary:

Pros:

Good everything

Cons:

Lack of setting

Short chapters

If you want a new type of love story, then read this book. Because its title is super long and makes me winded to type.