Fated To Be Urs by: boundbeyondtimes

Remember, these are just my opinions. Feel free to argue with or disagree with any points I make. 

Alright, so let's begin. The prologue and introduction are strong. They give a strong set up to the rest of the story. We see the characters, see what happens to the main female character as a child, and are given an idea as to what to expect for their characters during the duration of the book.

Now to the overall body. The grammar and spelling are correct. The spacing is fine. The punctuation is mostly right. The one big thing I have to say is that it's just very telly. Each character is just moving from one thing to the next, with no real detail involved. Ananya would be in the elevator, then immediately be in a meeting, then immediately be outside, then whatever. Same with Kai. There was not much description. Just action into action. 

The other big thing I have is why is there no dialogue in the first few chapters? Does like no one talk? Are they mute? That's kinda the big way people communicate. Not having people talk is like reading the day by day actions of a person except your missing half of the important details. It's just not that exciting.

While the characters were interesting, to me they felt like they had no depth or real personality. Ananya sees this guy, and that's all she thinks about for multiple paragraphs and chapters. Same with Kai. Do these people have friends? Besides like the one for each character. Do they have interests? Hobbies? While I think the pacing to the characters is good, there might need to be an extra push to developing them. 

Summary:

Pros:

Strong intro and prologue 

Good grammar

Good spacing and spelling

Correct punctuation

Good pacing

Cons:

Lack of description 

Constant action hopping of characters

Lack of dialogue

Lack of character development, depth, or personality

If you want a love story of two people who are willing to sacrifice, work hard, and do whatever it takes to make their love blossom, then read Fated To Be Urs.