Wrong Number

Author: @-pastelhearts

Title: Wrong Number

Cover: It is simple, yet it fits perfect for this type of book.

Description: I love the description of your book, it makes the reader intrigued as to reading the book.

Chapter One: I have actually read this book before this so I have, of course, went past the three chapters so this is going to be a little different. From the thirteen chapters that I did read, I must say that is the most fun I've ever had reading a book. It is such a great concept and I really need to read the rest of it. Grammar and punctuation wise, I hadn't find any mistakes so good job to you on that!

Characters :

Tegan ; by how you had described her, she sounds like a normal high school student. She gets semi good grades, she joins the football game with friends, and she is overall a well liked kid. She gets portrayed as a single child, which I'm not sure if she actually is.

Jed ; he has a lot of secrets, you can tell. He sounds like one of the jocks that are really bad and tough but behind closed doors, he's quite the opposite. He lets his 'girlfriend' ashley push him around a lot but yet he never seemed to mind after tegan came into his life.

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