Tremendous Ten and the Missing Piece of History
Author: @niranju98
Title: Tremendous Ten and the Missing Piece of History
Cover: Your cover is actually cute, I just think it would have been way better if you had use a different font.
Description: Your description was good. It had me interested. You gave the right amount of information to have me hooked.
Chapter One: Chapter one was relaxing. Her character seems like a genuine person. I'm assuming she has some type of power that connects to the earth. That might explain why she loves plants/nature.
Chapter Two: Chapter two has my interest. I'm glad she has a normal family. She does notice all the odd things around her which is good. If I was her I would have never left with them. I'm really not that trusting. Bit if she feels safe then so be it.
Chapter Three: So I'm getting a real Twitches vibe from then using the portal. I have feel that Josh and Jenny are going to be apart of the Tremendous Ten along with Cathy. So far your book is good and I'm going to continue reading it. So if you want to ask me anything else about your book, my name is below.
Characters :
Review By : newwarleans
Cathy: Innocent and caring. Her personality is great. She a normal girl, you didn't portray her as weak, mean, or someone with self esteem issues like most girls I read about in books.
Josh: I actually like his character he seem like he would be a good friend are just someone who there to help her.
Jenny: Jenny didn't say much but I like her too. All your characters seem so nice it's hard for me to not like them.
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