Here is an edited Chapter Four, to enter a Wattpad competition by The_Bookshop, called

NO PAIN, NO STORY

The challenge is to write a less than 2000 word story on the issue of Pain - as depicted by five different photo and description prompts.

I have chosen Pic. #3 No Pain, No Gain - and submitting this chapter, which is from the point of view of the victim of a terrible farm accident - a teenager, Jake.

I have a 'Mature' rating on it due to language that may be offensive to some.

The_Bookshop judges will critique this submission and then, when chosen revisions are made, it will be submitted again for judging, and you will be able to see the results here, as well.

Apologies if that's too much information - just clarifying why this story appears twice on my Wattpad profile.

***Update 8/10/2019***

Following critique and suggestions, the revised chapter has been chosen as a favourite of The_Bookshop and the story now appears in their Summer Anthology 2019 - https://w.tt/35euZze.

Here is my most welcome 'badge of honour' -