Thomas Walborn - commenting on "Hit and Run" by mB

a day ago

Ouch! Lets move past this to the part where Sid and the boys open the bag and are exposed to the nerve gas Johnny rigged. Johnny manages to crawl out of the trunk but cannot makes his legs work and so falls to the ground. They all lay there, looking at each other but unable to move as a wolf pack starts circling.

MediocreBrit

a day ago

You are not going to believe this. I'm not sure I believe it myself. But that was the exact ending I wrote, then had to trim it to get to 500 words. Unbelievable!

Thomas Walborn

21 hours ago

Just goes to prove great minds think alike. Now I wish I could come up with a story of my own

MediocreBrit

20 hours ago

you can have mine if you like. I'm done with it.

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