I wake up laying on a couch. A couch? Where the hell am I? Last I knew I was in shackles what happened? That's when I hear the door turn. I quickly sit up straight and I back myself up against the back of the couch. That's when my brother Zach steps into the room.
     "Oh my god, Bianca what happened to you?" He says worriedly. I can tell he's shocked to see me with my hair ruffled up and my clothes cut up and my back red and my eyes puffy from crying.
     "I-" I start to explain what happened when I see Jasper walk up behind Zach. "Behind You!" I yell, but it's too late. Jasper slices the knife through Zach's back and I watch as he falls to the ground and doesn't move. He's dead. My brother's dead. That's when u look up at Jasper and I see him holding up the knife smirking at it and then glancing over at me. Like he was deciding whether he was gonna kill me or let me live.
     That thought alone makes me scared for my life. "Well, well. Wasn't that just horrible that you're brother thought he was coming to pick you up from this place? That he thought he was gonna be a hero?" I look up at Jasper on the edge of tears. How could he?
      "Well now that we know who's in charge here, why don't we make a little deal?" He looks at me and by the way that his smile increases and he tilts his head I know I don't have a choice.
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My my my. These chapters are getting kinda short. Well don't worry I'll try for longer ones to come! Anyways make sure to point out any mistakes so I can fix it and I would love your guys feedback on my story so far!
-Jordan