This award was represented by Adorn Community and I am happy that His baby machine took his first award although in third place .🥉

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Wining two times in same award is an overwhelming sensation.
Thank you lilith_glimmer for hosting "The Wine Award"
A big thanks to the judges that took their precious time to valuate my story.

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Still couldn't believe that Maya the protagonist of this book grabbed the first price on the Cavillista Award hosted by
Harshywrites05

REVIEW —

Book Name : His Baby Machine 

Author : ArabelaTaylor

Judge : -dwrkzone

Vocabulary : 7/10

Grammar & Punctuation: 8/10

Structure & Setting: 7/10

Emotions & Visualization: 8/10

Hooking/Engaging: 8/10

Pace of the Scene: 6/10

TOTAL — 44/60

SHORT REVIEW: I love the writing style, it was descriptive and engaging with the combination of a variety of elements. The dialogues are well framed but I felt like if the language was simplified a little, it would make it easier to grasp and understand the scene. I would also recommend working on the flow of the scene a little but overall I feel like the scenes are written well and piques the reader's attention. Also, I love the relationship between Amor and Maya.

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PRIZES —

Thank you TheAloraConsortiumfor hosting this award
And thank you the judge -dwrkzone for your precious time and your valuable advice 🙏💗