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Karan (with a serious tone): "Manik... Kavya... Kavya meri aur Tejasswi ki beti hai."

Manik's playful expression fades, replaced by sheer shock. He stares at Karan, processing what he's just heard.

Manik (stunned): "kya?? teri beti hai vo?"

karan: " dheere bol mere baap.."

manik: " abe..tere baap ko pata chala na toh tuje kacha chaba jayega...."

karan took him to a side

manik: " ye tune humse chupaya kyu? i mean..itni badi baat...uncle aunty deserves to know the truth karan"

karan: " tuje kya lagta hai muje maza aa raha hai chupane ko? tu janta hai uss time kya hua tha?"

manik: " karan..usmai tejasswi ki galati nhi thi.....teri jagah mai hota toh shayad nandini ke liye bhi mai vahi karta"

karan: " janta hu mai..par reva aur shilpa ye nhi samajte.....vo aaj bhi ladoo ko doshi mante hai..aur tu janta hai ladoo ko , vo reva aur shilpa ko dukhi karke mere sath kabhi nhi rahegi...isiliye itne saal tak humne ye chupake rakha....manik pls...kisiko mat batana.."

Manik takes a deep breath, still trying to wrap his head around the revelation. 

manik: " ha thik hai..nhi bataunga..par...karan..thoda bhi trust nhi karta tha kya muj pe?"

karan could see hurt in his eyes. karan and manik were not only best friends but soul brothers 

karan: " manik. ..tu janta hai....ladoo aur omi ke baad tu hi hai jispe mai trust karta hu......par..mai khud itne messed up mind pe tha ki maine kisiko nhi bataya....chal na aab..ruthi hui biwi ki tarah nakhre mat dikha..."

manik: " dikhaunga..har nakhre dikhaunga....vaise bhi The Karan Kundrra muje manayega toh maze toh lunga na."

both chuckled

karan: :" acha sun na...dekh..muje princess aur ladoo ke pass jana hai..i am sure princess roo rahi hogi..yaha sambhal le"

manik: " tu jaa..mai hu na"

Karan gives Manik a grateful nod, the relief evident in his expression. 

prince: " karan kaha?"
manik: " aare...vo..nariyal pani lene gaya hai

umar: " kiske liye?"

manik: " n..nandini ke liye" 

nandini came there

nandini: " uff...yaar fanta chahiye"

umar: " nandu..fanta and nariyal pani?? nhi combination"

nandini:" nariyal paani? ye kisko chahiye? " 

prince: " tuje..."

nandini: " muje? 

yuvika: " manik ne bola"

nandini saw manik

nandini:ye kab hua?"

manik: " aare mai..mai toh 31 years pehele hi ho gaya tha...jalandar mai.."( nervously)

nandini: " kya?"

manik: " tu chal na meri maa...galat time pe entry marti hai ( wispers) 

he took her from there 

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Karan hurriedly pushes open the door to the room, his heart racing with worry.

 Kavya is sitting on the bed, tears streaming down her cheeks, her small body trembling as she cries loudly. Tejasswi is beside her, gently holding her little leg and carefully applying medicine to the scrape on her knee.

Kavya : " ahh...mumma..pain ho raha hai...."

Tejasswi's eyes are filled with concern as she tries to soothe her daughter, speaking in a soft, calming voice.

Tejasswi : ha betu...bas..ho gaya...thik ho jayega..."

But Kavya's cries only grow louder, her pain and fear evident. Karan's heart breaks at the sight, and without thinking, he rushes to their side, kneeling down next to the bed.

Karan : "Princess, Papa yahi hai....ye dard toh chukti se thik ho jayega.... okay?"

Kavya looks up at him through tear-filled eyes, her sobs quieting just a little at the sound of his voice. She reaches out for him, her small hands clutching his shirt as she continues to cry.

Kavya : " bohot pain ho raha hai papa...."

Karan gently takes her into his arms, holding her close as he kisses her forehead, trying to calm her down.

Karan : "Shh, princess.....aaise rote nhi hai na....see..mumma aapki pain abhi gayab kar degi..."

Tejasswi watches the scene, her own eyes moist with emotion. 

Seeing Karan hold Kavya so tenderly, she feels a sense of relief wash over her, knowing that together, they can handle anything.

Karan continues to hold Kavya, rubbing her back gently as she slowly starts to calm down, her cries reducing to soft whimpers.

Tejasswi  : i was so scared jab ye giri.....muje laga....."

Karan : " ladoo...i know..ek sec ke liye maki bhi daar gaya tha...par hamario princess toh hai hi strong"

tejasswi : " aur nhi toh kya?? aaisi choti moti chot se kuch nhi hota hamari beti ho ..haina?"

kavya nods with a small smile though tears were in her eyes

After a few moments, Kavya's breathing steadies, and she rests her head on Karan's shoulder, her little body exhausted from all the crying. 

Karan gently rocks her, his love and care evident in every movement.

Kavya  "Papa, aap mere saath yahi raho na..."

Karan : "Haan, princess. Main yahi hu."

Karan carefully lays Kavya back on the bed, pulling the blanket over her as she drifts off to sleep, exhausted from the day's events. He brushes a strand of hair from her face, his expression soft and full of love.

Karan: "She'll be okay now. Let her rest."

Tejasswi nods, leaning in to kiss Kavya's forehead before turning to Karan.

tejasswi : " bahar kya bolke aaye tum? sabko shak hoga na?"

karan: " vo...

the door creaks open again. This time, Manik and Nandini enter, with Reyansh following closely behind. Tejasswi's eyes widen with fear.

Tejasswi: " sunny, yeh... yeh log yahan kaise...?"

Karan gently places a reassuring hand on her arm, his touch calming her slightly. He leans in and whispers back.

Karan : ladoo..manik janta hai sab....abhi hi bataya."

Tejasswi's tense shoulders relax a little, though she still casts a nervous glance at Manik and Nandini. 

nandini: " kavya kaisi hai?"

tejasswi : " abhi thik hai...."

Manik, sensing the tension in the room, decides to lighten the mood.

Manik : "Arey yaar, kya mahaul bana rakha hai tum logon ne. vaise karan..yaad hai Jab hum chhote the, hum kehte the ki hum apne bachon ki shaadi karwayenge. Aur dekho, aaj Reyansh Kavya ke peeche pada hai."

Karan, catching onto Manik's playful tone, chuckles, shaking his head.

Karan : "Haan, lagta hai Reyansh ne seriously le liya hai yeh baat. Ab toh yeh Kavya ke peeche peeche hi ghoom raha hai."

Reyansh, standing by the bed, looks at Kavya with concern written all over his young face. Even in his childish innocence, it's clear how worried he is for her. His small hands fidget nervously, and he doesn't take his eyes off her.

Reyansh : "Kavya theek hai na, Chachu? Usko zyada dard toh nahi ho raha?"( fully anxious)

Karan's heart melts at the sight of Reyansh's genuine concern. He smiles warmly him, reaching out to ruffle his hair.

Karan : "Reyansh, tum Kavya ke liye mujhse zyada pareshaan ho. Lagta hai tumne waqai apne papa ki baat seriously le li."

Manik, catching onto Karan's teasing, joins in with a laugh.

Manik (grinning, nudging Reyansh): "Bas beta, ab Kavya ko poori tarah se theek hone do. Phir tum dono koi dusturb nhi karega...iska baap..i mean papa bhi nhi"

Reyansh blushes a little but nods earnestly, still focused on Kavya. Karan can't help but smile at the scene, feeling a surge of affection for both his daughter and his nephew.

Karan (mock serious, giving a harmless curse): " oye malhotra...vo meri beti hai samjha...!"

Manik: " aur meri hone wali bahu"

Reyansh: " aur meri ...um..meri...mom...meri kya?"

All chuckled

Nandini: " tumhari..um??"

Tejasswi: " best partner"

Everyone laughs at Teju 's playful comment except karan who gave her a glare

tejasswi : " kya? tumhe chedhne ka mauka muje baar baar nhi milta sunny"

karan chuckles shaking his head .

Teju standing by, places a hand on Reyansh's shoulder, smiling down at him.

Tejasswi (softly): "Reyansh, tumhari jaano aab thik hai..tum bhi thodi der rest karlo..phir shaadi mai bhi enjoy karna hai na?"

Reyansh nods again, but he stays close to Kavya's bed, refusing to leave her side just yet. The sight of him standing there, so protective, makes Karan's heart swell with pride and love. He glances at Tejasswi, who shares the same look of affection.

For a moment, everything feels right, as they all share a laugh, standing together as a family, united by love and the playful bond between their children.

the door to the room suddenly swings open. Shilpa and Reva enter, their expressions stern and unyielding. They immediately lock eyes with Tejasswi, and the warmth in the room seems to evaporate, replaced by a tense silence.

Shilpa (coldly): "Karan, hume baat karni hai. Chalo yahaan se."

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