Mystery/Thriller [SEMI-FINAL]
Congrats for making it through Round 2.
Those who wins have their score equal or above 80% (meaning at least 44/55).
The following list is in no particular order. Names and book titles has been bolded, total score has been italicize for easier view. Books that made it through are italicized as well.
1. Shut up and dance by @Sam_le_fou
title (4.5/5)
-plot (9/10)
-characterization (10/10)
-cover (5/5)
-description (3.5/5)
-grammar (10/10)
-creativity (9/10)
-total (51/55)
❝Well done on that cover! I am so happy to see a decent one. Damn. I really love what I've read of your story (will actually go back and vote), and I hope to continue it just for funsies. You write with little to no grammar problems, creative uses of language and scene setting, and gave clear character sketches with few words. The only thing that I personally would encourage you to improve, was the synopsis. It just falls a bit flat. Good luck with the awards! I think I'm rooting for you.❞
2. He Sees Me by @ShawMcKnight
-title (3/5)
-plot (7/10)
-characterization (7/10)
-cover (2/5)
-description (3/5)
-grammar (6/10)
-creativity (8/10)
-total (36/55)
❝Hiya, doll! So, this book looks pretty interesting, but a few things ruined it for me - though the synopsis was kind of intriguing, it was also extremely vague. The cover was not very professional and the grammar needed a bit of editing. But you have a cool idea going on, so don't stop writing! Just edit a bit, request a cover at a cover shop, and all should be fine. This is all out of encouragement, and not because I hate it - all new writers make mistakes like these! Good luck!❞
3. Betrayal by @Rosie_80
-title (3/5)
-plot (7/10)
-characterization (6/10)
-cover (2/5)
-description (3/5)
-grammar (7/10)
-creativity (6/10)
-total (34/55)
❝Hello, darling! Just a few tips; your English is not bad for a second-language writer (I can so relate) but it does need a bit of editing. I would recommend you apply for a cover at a cover shop, as well, and that you take a bit of time to edit the book yourself, if not with an editor on Wattpad. The synopsis intrigued me, which is good, and the title is pretty good too. Never stop writing, keep up the good work! These are mistakes every new writer makes, so just keep at it!❞
4. Darkness Falls by @MarcRogers
-title (4/5)
-plot (8/10)
-characterization (7/10)
-cover (3/5)
-description (4/5)
-grammar (7/10)
-creativity (8/10)
-total (41/55)
❝Ooh, this one is pretty intriguing! Right off the bat, I got a feel for the characters and their personalities and enjoyed their interaction! I enjoyed the different POVs, the lyrical thoughts Emily started with, and so on. A quick edit is needed here and there, and I would recommend a new cover, but overall, I quite liked it. Well done, and keep writing!❞
5. Midweek Murder by @TrumpSuppoerters27
-title (4/5)
-plot (7/10)
-characterization (7/10)
-cover (4/5)
-description (3/5)
-grammar (4/10)
-creativity (7/10)
-total (38/55)
❝That cover is pretty intriguing, and with your whole 'Wednesday' theme going on, the title is very appropriate. I enjoyed the aesthetics and the differences in your characters. However, your book is very hard to read - the grammar and punctuation need quite a bit of editing. I would recommend you working on it with someone. Never stop writing! Your ideas are quite intriguing. ❞
6. The Psychopath Maker by @AmethystAmber87
47.5/55
7. Finding Haylee by @speakingofLynn
Title=4
Cover=4
Description=3
Plot=8
Creativity=9
Character=8
Grammer=8
Total=44
"The story is really catchy. The suspense and mystery is real. You can't seem to let it go once you have started reading it. I really loved it"
8. Like Minds by @MistressCara
Title=4
Cover=4
Description=4
Plot=8
Grammer=7
Creativity=9
Character=8
Total=44
"This book is really nice. It has a nice theme to it. The grammer needs to be improved but all in all this book is a go-for"
9. Dark Dreams by @ViolaMusaraj
Title=4
Cover=3
Description=3
Plot=7
Creativity=10
Character=8
Grammer=8
Total=43
10. Incognito Order by @dis_is_anoushka
Total score=44
11. In Warm Blood by @TheSlayWriter
Total score=45
12. 1:2 by @freakingcookies
Total score=38
13. Destination 1974 by @CE_Parker
53/55
14. Weeping Angel by @ThatGirlBoss
Cover - 2/5
Title - 2/5
Blurb - 4/5
Plot - 7/10
Creativity - 7/10
Character - 8/10
Grammar - 9/10
Total - 39/55
15. Creatures of the Night by @Ja2Anjelica
Cover - 3/5
Title - 2/5
Blurb - 2.5/5
Plot - 8/10
Creativity - 7/10
Character - 9/10
Grammar - 8/10
Total - 39.5/55
16. Blind Eye by @__Atsuko__
Cover - 4/5
Title - 3/5
Blurb - 4/5
Plot - 5/10
Creativity - 5/10
Character - 6/10
Grammar/Sentence Structure - 6/10
Total - 33/55
17. The Flames by @SadAndLost101
Total score (out of 55): 49
Note: I loved the originality of the storyline. Very suspenseful. :)
18. Blackout by @Kim_Crys
Total score (out of 55): 46
Note: Really creative and I loved the format!
19. The Agent by @Soulful_Sal
Total score (out of 55): 43
Note: I love the way it is written. The writing style is really great and makes the story easy to read.
20. Tonight Alive by @ArtieKaree
Total score (out of 55): 50
Note: An interesting plot and I absolutely love the characters!
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