Humour (Concluded)
FIRST PLACE: Ruckus by @LazyBrew
Title: 4/5
Plot: 7/10
Characterization: 7/10
Cover: 3/5
Description: 4/5
Grammar: 9/10
Creativity: 7/10
Total: 42/55
SECOND PLACE: Micah & Hakim by @MolayneMelody
Title: 3/5
Plot: 8/10
Characterization: 6.5/10
Cover: 2/5
Description: 1.5/5
Grammar: 8/10
Creativity: 8/10
Total: 37/55
Review: Just a short note, but I sincerely hope you reconsider the genre. Perhaps you don't think much about it, but your book has much more potential if you put it as a spiritual, serious genre instead of humorous/comedy. This book is essentially about a boy's struggle about his identity (as least from what I read up to), it's such an important idea that if you write seriously, it can create a riveting, relating story to teenagers and not just a story that is read for a laugh.
THIRD PLACE: Meridian Lights by @MikleoKrein
Title: 3/5
Plot: 6/10
Characterization: 7/10
Cover: 2.5/5
Description: 3/5
Grammar: 8/10
Creativity: 7/10
Total: 36.5/55
Review: Show off your winning stickers at the end. To be frank, your first page is extremely disorganized and stirs distaste in me. The readers come in for a read, not a show-off. The second chapter is needed, but not necessarily. Challenge yourself. Incorporate the techniques in your writing. Also, I'm a big fan of not translating foreign language because it allows the characters to be themselves and force the readers to think by taking in the characters' tone and body language.
Just Me by @Charlie_45
Title: 1.5/5
Plot: 7/10
Characterization: 8/10
Cover: 2/5
Description: 2.5/5
Grammar: 8/10
Creativity: 7/10
Total: 36/55
Congratulation to the winners. Sincerely sorry to Charlie_45. Thank you for participating in the Awards, and we're proud and grateful for your journey with us till this end.
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