Ok guys, this is just a short of me with the feedback I got.

For starters with the grammar, I do realize I need to improve on it, When some people read it especially my brother, he explained to me That some words will have to be Is spelled in a certain way, It does depend on what exactly it is for, Like something spelled that has already happened or something later down the road that will happen, It was interesting learning that.

To what you guys know though, I do use a microphone when I spell words, Simply because I like it because it's faster, I know most of the words But I still prefer the microphone because it's quicker, Some of the phones I use are different and for some reason it makes the microphone act different as well when I Say what ever I say.

But yes, I do know I need to start working on more with my grammar, I know it still needs a lot work so yes, I can't really deny that at all.

The other thing the story being short.

Honestly I know some people don't like How quick some parts were rush, Yeah I can definitely Agree with that, But to be fair though this was just a quick one short idea chapter, If I end up making this into a full fanfiction Then I'll definitely fix that problem.

I think though one of the worst parts was rush was with hiccup leaving and fighting the red death.

I do believe I could have done more, Especially after especially after when hiccup Return, I'm not gonna lie. I do feel like some of the characters were out of character.

I wrote this overnight after having the idea in my head for a while, I was already getting tired but I wanted it out and publish as I kept procrashing it for to long.

Finally will I continue on this story?

Honestly no.

Well not really maybe in the future but right now I do want to complete some of the other stories I have first.

Hiccup goes to helheim and how to train your demon.

Anyway, if you guys have any more feedback or questions Leave it in the comments down below please.