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Ash:Laxmi paati..

Laxmi:A..ashwin..

Ash:Inga enna paati pandringa.. adhuvu indha nerathula?

Laxmi:Tha..thambi..thambi en..

Ash:Seri seri Irunga vaanga..vandhu utkaarunga yen ipdi odi vandhinga..vaanga utkaarunga modhala..

Laxmi:Illa pa..nee..Inga.. enna pandra?

Ash:Naan Chennai ku kelamburen paati thangachi eh paaka..

Laxmi:Che..chennai kaa.. thambi nee ippo Inga dha irukkanu..

Ashwin frowned at her.

Ash:Yen paati apdi soldringa?ennaachu?

Laxmi:Ashwin..enna manichiru pa..

Ash:Paati enna neenga..ippo yen samandhame illaama manippu kettutu irukkinga?Ennaachu ungalukku?

Laxmi:Peravu..indha maari oru peran enakku irukkardha nenachu naan vera enna pa pandradhu?

Ash:Peranaa..?? Arul aah?

Laxmi:Aama pa..

Ash:Avan enna pannaan?

Laxmi:Avan andha Durai odayu Sarathy odayu kootu sendhu irukkaan pa..

Ashwin gasped in shock.

Ash:Enna paati soldringa?

Laxmi:Aama Ashwin..avan mattu illa unga veetla ippo oru pudhusaa oru pulla vandhuche..aah..Sadhanaa.. avalu avanga kooda kootu sendhirukkaa..

Ash:Paati enna paati soldringa? ungalukku epdi idhellaa therinjadhu?

Laxmi:Naan andha Arul.. phone peseetu irundhappo ketten pa..naan paathuttu avana yen da ipdi pandrenu kettadhukku..naan idha yaartayaadhu sonnaa ennayave kola panneerven nu sonnaan pa Avan..naan solla dha seivenu solli avana thalli vittutu unga veetukku dha pa odi vandhuttu irundhen..modhala Namma un veetukku polaa vaa..

Ash:Enga veetukkaa..yedhukku paati..Namma unga veetukku polaa..avana poi paakalaa..avanukku enna prechana nu kekalaa..

Laxmi:Aiyo Ashwin.. avanga enna pesunaanga nu therinjaa nee ipdi porumaiyaa nikka maata..

Ash:Enna pesunaanga?

Laxmi:Inniku 12 ndraikku unga veetla irukkavangalayu Sivaangi pulla veetla irukkavangalayu ore nerathula kola pandradhaa peseetu irundhaanga pa..

Ashwin gasped and widened his eyes in shock.

Ash:Paatiiii... enna soldringa neenga?

Laxmi:Aama kanna...apdidha peseetu irundhaanga... vaa modhala namma unga veetukku polaa..

Ash:Aahn vaanga..

He stepped front but stopped and turned towards her.

Ash:Paati neenga onnu pannunga..idho auto vandhiruchu neenga idhule yeri enga veetukku batharmaa poi ellaathayu sollunga ellaarayu onnaave iruka sollunga..naanu idhey auto le poi pannaiyaar aranmanai ku yerangeeren..

Laxmi:Enna kanna soldra..appo inga irukkavangala yaaru paathuppaa?

Ash:Anga Kavin uh Mugen uh paathuppaanga paati..inga dha ippo soldradhukkum paathukardhukkum yaaru illa..naan inga poren, neenga anga ponga..yerunga auto le..

They both entered inside the auto and first drove towards their village and Laxmi got down from the auto once they reached Ashwin's house and Ashwin went off from there.

Laxmi entered inside their house but got jerked when she kicked something on the floor.She gulped and..,

Laxmi:Ponvannan..

Pon:Amma..

Laxmi:Thambi enga irukkinga enakku iruttula onnu therila..

Pon:Kavin torch on pannu..

Kavin switched on the torch but Laxmi gasped and shouted in fear.Kavin turned towards his back and holded the person's wrist who aimed to hit on Ponvannan's head.

All got alerted then.

Mugen stood up and kicked the person.

Sak:Mugen anna unakku pinnaadi..

Mugen stopped the another person's wrist from hitting him and pulled the sickle from his hold.

Kavin:Mugen potruu..yaaru enna nu paakaadha...ipdi line ah varadha paatha plan maari dha da irukku...

Saranya:Aiyo en pulla..

Rajammal:Deii aama da Sivaangi enga da?Thaniyaa vera irukka...

Mug:Kavin ivangala paa..

He stopped hissing when he received a slight sickle cut on his arm.

Vijaya:Aiyo paathu da..

Mug:Enakku onnu illa ma..

Pon:Paathu pa..neenga ivangala paarunga.. Sakthi amma vayu paati ayu paathukko..naan Sivaangi eh paathukuren..

Sak:Seri pa..

Kavin:Appa paathu..deii enga da pora..mavane..yaaraa neengalaa..

He grabbed the person's wrist and twirled him straddling his neck with his forearm.

Ponvannan moved slowly towarsd the hut with another sickle in his palm but gasped seeing the opened hut.He rushed in and shouted "Sivaangi" by seeing the empty hut.

He ran towards the back gate and gasped seeing it opened.He ran out dialing his son's number.

Here before 10 minutes..,

Ashwin reached the pannaiyaar aranmanai and entered in by hiding behind the pillars by tieing his veshti upto his knee.

He looked the silhouette of someone near the bush he grabbed the person's wrist and pulled him before straddling his neck hard by making him out off breath.He slowly left the person on the ground when he stopped his struggling and hided behind the next pillar.

He somehow reached near the main entrance and entered inside through the door as it was already opened alerting him that they entered in before him.

He hided the tools and furnitures and the pillows and reached Dharma and Saraswathi's room.

He gasped seeing the person who is almost ready to stab Dharma with knife and ran towards him stopping him and closed his mouth before twirling his neck and pushing him down.

Ashwin moved towards Dharma and started to wake him up.

Ash:Mama mama mama.. endhiringa mama..

Dharma woke up with jerk.

Dharma:Ashwin..

Ash:Mama..naan dha Ashwin..aththai eh eluppunga..

Dharma:Yen pa ennaach..heyy..

He pushed him and caught the person's wrist who raised his hand with sickle towards Ashwin and kicked him on the floor.Saraswathi too woke up hearing the sound.

Saras:Ennanga.. Ashwin nee inga enna da pandra?

Ash:Aththa adhellaa ippo pesa neram illa..endhiringa mathavangalayu kaapathanu namma..vaanga..

Dharma stood up to wear his shirt which is on the hanger but hissed when the another one who had hided behind his shirt scratched his arm.Ashwin gritted his teeth and pulled the sickle from his hold and made his head to dash on the wooden cupboard.He groaned and fell on the floor.

Ash:Seekro vaanga mama..

Saras:Enna pa nadakudhu inga..

Ash:Aththa adhellaa onnu illa neenga bayapudaadhinga vaanga..

Then the trio stepped out from the room and got stratled hearing the shout from Suruli's room.

Ashwin ran inside and saw the scene where Suruli with sickle in his hand and the person was groaning on the floor by clutching his arm.

Kathir:Ashwin nu..

Ash:Anna neenga anniyayu Kathir ayu paathukonga.. Kathir bayapasa koodaadhu seriyaa..

Kathir:Illa avan appa ve..

Ashwin kneeled down before him cupping his cheeks before wiping his tears.

Ash:Inga paaru Kathir..ivanga laa un enemies..

Kathir:Enemies aah?

Ash:Aama avanga un mayilu venu nu sanda podradhukkaaga vandhirukkaanga..namma avangala epdi summa vida mudiyu sollu..

Kathir:Yaaru mayil eh yaaru kekuradhu?

He asked angrily.

Ash:Ahh..appo namma avanga kooda sanda pottu namma mayila paaathuaknu le?

Kathir:Namma mayilu illa en mayilu..

Ash: Seri un mayilu..

Kathir:Avanagala naan paathukuren..appa aruvaa ve kudu pa..

Ash:No aruvaa laa venaa..nee bayapudaama irundhu ellaathayu amaidhiyaa paapiyaama..apro namma mayila poi paapo seriyaa?

Kathir:Ah okay aana mayil uh oorukku poyirukku nu dhane amma solluchu?

Ash:Aama mayilu oorukku dha poyirukkaa..namma andha oorukke poi paapo seriyaa?

Kathir:Aah seri anga paaru oruthan Nivas anna room ku munnaadi..

He stood up immediately and Suruli ran towards the person and stabbed his back before kicking him down.

Ash:Vaa..anni paathukonga Kathir eh..

Maha:Seri pa..neenga paathu pannunga..

Ash:Mm vaanga onnaave irunga..aththaya paathukonga..mama ku pinnaadiye nadanga..

Ashwin walked behind them while Dharma walked before them guarding them between.

Kathir:Ashwin inga paaru..

Ashwin grapped kicked him on his hip and he fell down groaning by getting hit on his head by the tabel edge.

Suruli woke up Nivas and got him out.And somehow they managed to get everyone out from their respective rooms and all stood on the centre of the living room.

Suba:Yaaru pa ivanga laa?

Ash:Durai Sarathy oda aalunga ma..

Gwori:Avanga dha jail le irukkaanga le?

Ash:Avanga veliya aal vachu panneetu irukkaanga ma..aana andha aal eh namma kudumbathula irukka rendu peru dha..

Nivas:Nama kudumbathulayaa?

Ash:Aama da..

And he strated to tell about Laxmi's words as they gasped in shock.

Saras:Andha sirikki mava Sadhanaa mela enakku munnaadi irundhe sandhegam dha..

Dharma:Arul ipdi pannuvaan nu nenachu kooda paakala..

Ranga:Aama anna..namma koodaye irundhu..paiyan maari paathukittavanaa ipdi erangeerkaan namakku yedhiraa?Ennaale nambave mudila..

Dharma:Ashwin unga veetla..

He stopped hearing the phone ringing sound.

Ash:Naan paakuren.

He moved towars the common telephone of their house and attended it.

Pon:Hello..

Ash:Appa..

Pon:Ashwin enga da irukka?

Ash:Appa naan pannaiyaar aranmanai le irukken..neenga enga irukkinga anga ellaaru safe dhane?

Pon:Aiyo Ashwin..namma Sivaangi eh kaano da..

Ashwin gasped in shock but winced loudly in pain when the person behind the curtain stabbed his hip with knife.

Ash:Ammaaa..

All rushed towards him Veera and Ranga caught that person's wirst and kicked him Black and blue.

Ashwin left the phone down and sat on his knees clutching his hip with tears.

Saras:Aiyo...

Suba:Retho pogudhu akka..

Dharma removed his shirt and tied it around Ashwin's waist tightly to stop the bleeding.

Ash:Siv..vaangi..

Saras:Thambi..ennanga hospital polaa vaanga..

Ashwin stopped her holding her wrist by crying.

Saras:Valikudhaa da..vaa namma hosp..

Ash:Sivaangi eh kaano ma...

All gasped in shock.

Dharma took the left down phone and placed it on his ears.

Dharma:Hello..

Pon:Hello Dharma..en paiyanukku ennaachu?

Dharma:Avana yedho paradesi kutheetaan..nee enga irukku.. Ashwin enna soldraan?Sivaangi enga?

Pon:Enna manichiru Dharma..

Dharma:Seri namma avala kaapaatheerlaa..ava romba dhairiyasaali unna maariye..namma paathurlaa vala..

He said with tears.

Pon:Dharmaa..ennaala avala paadhuhaaka mudila enna manichiru da..

Dharma:Nee modha enga iruka nu sollu..

Pon:Road le dha da thanna thaniyaa nikkiren..enakku enna panna nu therila..kalaile irundhu avlo sandhoshamaaa irundhuchu pulla...avala ippo enga poi naan thaeduven..enakku onnume purila Dharma..

Dharma:Seri nee engayaadhu poi thaedi paaru...avalukkulaa onnu aagaadhu da...naangalu kelamburo..

Inbetween their conversation Ashwin calmed his mind and recalled the events and sharing of her thoughts with him.

Yesterday night inbetween their rest time after the exhausting moment.

Siv:Yen..athtaan?

Ash:Mmm..

He asked stroking her hairs.

Siv:Ippo..nee naan illaama thaniyaa irukkenu vachukko..

Ash:Mmm..

Siv:Naan college poyiren..nee thaniyaa irukka..dhideernu en nenappu unakku adhigam aayirudhu..

Ash:Seri..

He said kissing her cheeks soflty.

Siv:Appo en nyabaga arthamaa nee enga pova?

Ash:Inga dha kudisa kulla vandhurven..yen kekura?

Siv:Kudisa mattu dhaanaa?

Ash:Mmm..

Siv:Yen?

Ash:Yen naa..nee inga dha en pera moochukku monnoru dhadava koptrukka, katheerka(bv)...adhunaale dha ..

Siv:Ohh..

Ash:Mmm..

Siv:Aanaa naan enga theriyumaa poven?

Ash:Enga pova?

Siv:Vayal ku poven, apro apdiye thoppuku poven..motor room le iruppen..apdiye konja nerathukku..

Ash:Yen anga?

Siv:Anga dhane en purushan verva sindhi olachirukkaan..avan vaasam dha enakku anga varum..andha maram chedi kodi vaasatha vida..

Ash:Ohhoo..aana nee en verva vaasam vachu dha en nenapula irukkanu naa nee engayume poga venaame di...

Siv(frowns):Yen apdi soldra?

Ash:Adhaa unmelaye en vaasam irukkume..

She blushed and hitted his chest but he hovered over her chuckling before kissing her lips.

He remembered the moment and stood up from the floor wincing.

Saras: Thambi enna da pandra?

Ash:Mama..

Dharma:Sollu da..

Ash:Mama ava enga vayal le dha iruppaa..

Dharma:Enna Ashwin soldra?

Ash:Ava anga dha iruppaa kandippaa...naan poren..

Suruli:Naanga poro da..nee iru..hospital ku po..

Ash:Illa anna neenga Irunga naan poren..

Dharma:Ashwin..

Ash:Enkku avala paakaamaa dhaa romba valikudhu mama..idhellaa enaku periya valiyaave therila..

He walked past him clutching his hip, stopped the auto after reaching the entrance and left from there before Dharma could come. Dharma followed him behind sighing.

Before one and half hours..,

Sivaangi hugged herself curling on the mat but got jerked when the current went off.Her eyes filled with tears.She took her phone and switched on the torch before lightning the candle by clasping her knees close to her chest.

Siv:Yen aththaan enta sollaama pona..

She placed her cheek on her forearm and closed her eyes without her knowledge but soon got jerked hearing the commotions outside the hut.

She switched off the torch and placed her ear on the wall hearing the voice.

"Enna aanaalu mudichurnu da.. oruthanayu vida koodaadhu..illanaa Durai anna nammala summave vida maataaru.."

Sivaangi gulped.

"Anna inga enna kudisa maari ennamo irukku.."

She blowed off the candle immediately and gulped sweating.

"Adhula laa onnu irukkaadhu da..nee vaa namma modhala ulla poi paakalaa.."

She stood up from the floor clutching her phone and moved out following them behind by taking the knife in her palm.

But one of the persons from their gang saw her silhouette and..,

"Anna anga paarunga oru ponnu nikkudhu.."

"Deii adhu andha Dharmalingam oda ponnu dha da pudinga da avala.."

She widened her eyes and saw herre and there and ran twards the backgate and ran from there as some of them chased her behind yelling her to stop.

Siv:Athathaan enga aththaan pona..aiyo avanga enna aavaanga..namakku mattu dha theriyum..mama aththa enna aavaanga..call pannuvomaa..aana namma call panni avangalukku edhaadhu aayiruchu naa..

She, with n number of thoughts moved towards his field and hided behind the pump set wall breathing hard.

They searched her everywhere with sickle and knife in their hands.She wiped her tears and sweats restlessly seeing here and there to escape from there but got shocked when..,

"Anna ava inga irukkaa naa"

She turned back with widened eyes but before he could touch her she sprinkled the water on his face and scratched his arm with the knife and ran towards the grove area by clucthing the phone and knife with her right palm while her left palm holded her saree.

After running towards the mango grove,the last one of their grove.She stopped and hided behind the mango tree and coughed with dry throat resulting of the heavy run.

But stopped coughing and closed her mouth with her palms hearing..,

"Enga da ponaa ava.."

"Inga dha edhaadhu marathukku pinaadi olunjuttu iruppaa thedunga da kandu pudichurlaa.."

She gulped and looked here and there again and stared the hut near the edge of their grove and hiler husband's words echoed in her ears..,

"Ingalaa varave koodaadhu seriyaa..enna paakanu naalu kooda andha kudisai le dha irukkanu..inga laa varakoodaadhu..inga paambu poochi ellaa varu..seriyaa?"

Sivmv:Sorry aththaan enakku vera vali therila..

She took her step forward but someone caught her wrist and pulled her before closing her mouth .Her eyes got filled with tears feeling her husband's touch.She hugged him tight turning back towards him and cried in his chest.He hugged her back caressing her hairs.

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TBC...

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