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At evening 6 'o clock..,

Saras:Sivu ellaaa eduthu vachuttiyaa?

Siv:Aahn vachutten ma..

Saras:Saela katta venaa di vasadhiyaa edhaadhu pottuko..appo dha bus le pogumbodhu amma amma nu kathaama iruppa..

Siv:Maa po ma..

Saras:Po maa vaa?Vandhenu vai..soldra paecha kettu edhaadhu nalla dress aah pottuka..apro bus uh le poitu irukkumbodhu maa andha pin eh kalattu, indha pin eh kalattu,kuthudhu adhu pannudhu, idhu panudhu nu tholla panna avlodha paathukka..

Siv:Mch..yeppo paathaalu blackmail blackmail blackmail..

She murmered hitting her forehead and called Ashwin through her personal phone.

Ash:Hello sollu pa..

Siv:Maa enga irukkinga?

Ash:Vayal le dha da chittu.. sollu..

Siv:Velayaaa irukkinglaa?

Ash:Illa da mudinchu..veetukku kelambeetu irukko..

Siv:Irukkomaa..yaarellaa?

Ash:Naan Kavin, appa, appatha..

Siv:Ohh..seri seri..

Ash:Mmm nee enna pandra?

Siv:Naan dress ellaa pack panni vachuttu irukken..

Ash:Mmm..nalla comfy edhaadhu pottuko chittu..night travel le... unakku dha free aah irukkum..

Siv:Enna amma uh pullayu ore maari soldringa?

He chuckled.

Ash:Amma uh sonnaanga laa?

Siv:Aama inga ore thittu..

Ash:Yen ma unakkaaga dhane soldraanga..maathikko..enakkum bore adikudhule ore maari paathu..

Siv:Adikku adikku..adhukkulla bore adichiruchu le?

Ash:Bore naa apdi kedaiyaadhu..epdi soldradhu..mm..aahn..oru fantasy maari pudhusaa try panlaa le?

Siv:Panlaam panlaam..

Ash:Mmm..enna pandra?

Siv:Adhaa sonnane pa..dress pack pandren..nee kelambeetiyaa?

Ash:Illa ma appa yaarkoodayo peseetu irukkaaru vandhadhu ponu..

Siv:Ohh..seri nee enna dress podra?

Ash:Namakku oru shorts irundhaale podhume..

Siv:Adi vaangippa enkitta..namma family mattu illa..naraya paeru varuvaanga show kaamchuttu irukkadha'thaan..

Ash:Yen di shorts pottaa show kaamikardhaa?

Siv:Aama pinna illayaa?Olunga shirt and pant oda vaa..

Ash:Eii podi pant ellaa mudiyaadhu..naan venaa kaili kattikiren..

Siv:Seri ennamo pannu..dress laa yeppo pack pannuva?Mama varattu nee veetukku poga vendiyadhu dhane?

Ash:Appa kooda dha di yeppavume poven..varattu poren..

Siv:Appa uh maganu veliya mattu dha sanda poda vendiyadhu..ulla laa paaso kotti kedakkudhu pola..

Ash:Saaptiyaa?

Siv:Ohh adhellaa mudinchu..ini naan bus le varumbodhu dha saapduven full uhh..

Ash:Adhu seri..

Siv:Seri nee kelambu'thaan seekro..

Ash:Poren di ap..

Pon:Polaamaa pa?

Ashwin got startled hearing his voice suddenly he slipped his phone inside his shirt pocket and gulped at him.Ponvannan narrowed his eyebrows.

Pon:Enna pa?

Ash:Adh..adhu..onnu illa pa..polaam..

Pon:Mmm..Kavin enga?

Ash:Kav..vin..

He searched for him and spotted him near the well speaking to someone over the phone smiling ear to ear.Ashwin looked at his father through corner of his eyes gulping.

Ashmv:Aiyo ivan vera idam porul yeval illaama pandraane..

Ash heart:Aama sir edhuvume pannala..

Pon:KAVIN..

Kavin got jerked and moved towards him sighing.

Kavin:Sollunga..

Pon:Polaama da?

Kavin:Aahn neenga ponga naan apro varen..

Saying he left from there.Ashwin sighed seeing him and looked at his father.Ponvannan smiled and moved front.But stopped when Kavin walked past him slipping his phone inside his pocket.Ashwin and Ponvannan gasped seeing him.

Ashmv:Andha loosu paechukku ivlo mariyaadhayaa?Namba mudilaye..Amritha... vandhu paathukuren unna..pondatti eh vida machinichi nalla pullayaa iruppaa polaye..

Ash heart:Chi vekkamaa illa?

He sighed hitting his back head and followed his father and brother.

Kavin:Appatha enga?

Pon:Avang peseetu irukkaanga apro varuvaanga..

Ash:Epdi pa thaniyaa varuvaanga.. naan venaa irundhu kooptu varen..

Pon:Vandhiruvaanga..Lakshmi amma vandhirukkaanga avanga kooda dha peseetu irukkaanga..apdiye rendu peru veetukku vandhiruvaanga namma polaam..

Kavin nodded his head and started the jeep as they drove towards their house.

After 8'O clock..,

Ash:Maa polaamaa ?

Sara:Ombodhu manikku dhane da.... polaa medhuvaa..

Ash:Mch..maaaaaaa...

Sara:Chii ennadaa idhu pasu maatu velamburathule vara maari..nee venaa kelambu po..

Ash:Aii sweet mummy..bye ma..neenga medhuvaa vaanga..

Pon:Enga pa pora?

Ash(gulps):Adhu...vandhu pa..naan aahn..naan poi.. van ellaa ready aayiruchaa nu paathuttu irukken neenga medhuva vaanga..

Pon:Ohh seri pa paathu po..

Ash:Seri pa..

He smiled wide and went from there taking his,Kavin's and Sakthiis luggages.

Here..,

Siv:Maa polaam maa..

Saras:Mani yettu dhane di aagudhu adhukkulla enna unakku... polaa iru..poi andha puliyodhara vaali eh kondu vaa po..

Sivaangi huffed and moved inside the kitchen.And they all got ready and moved towards towards the oor ellai to climb the van,arranged for the trip.

Ashwin came there with Kavin in the bullet with poosanikkai(white pumpkin) in his hands.They walked towards the bus after parking the bike and Ashwin gasped and began to loosen the grip on poosanikkai seeing his girl infront of him who was dolled up in her yellow colour high slit kurti with skirt.

Kavin:Deii deii eruma eruma kondaa adha..

He got the poosanikka from him and gave it to Sakthi who was beside him.But he got stumbled so he passed it to Ponvannan.

Pon:Ente yen da kudukure..?

Sak:Daddy adha ennaale thooka kooda mudila..

Pon:Mch..unnalaa..

He sighed and..,

Pon:Saranya idha saamiyaar te kuduthuru...

Sara:Seringa..

She got it from him and moved towards the poosaari.

But stopped when..,

Saras:Heyy Sarannn..

Saranya smired widely at her.

Sara:Akkaa..aiyo idhu vera..thambi deii Sakthi idha pudi da..

She handed over the poosanikkai again to him before Sakthi could drop that down.Kavin get that and give it back to Ashwin.

Ash:Deii enna da?

Kavin:Nee dhane vaangeetu vandha neeye poi kudu..

Ash:Mch..konjo nero sight adikka vidraanungalaa..ellaa indha poosaniye solanu..

He moved towards the priest and gave it to him and walked towards Sivaangi standing behind her.She gulped and maintained a straight face infront of every village people.

Ash:Kunjaayi..

Siv:Mmm..

Ash:Semma azhaga irukka di..

Siv:Idhu veru top and skirt dha aththaan..

Ash:Eii podi unakkulaa sonnaa puiryaadhu..aiyo andha dhamma thundu iduppu irukke..

Saying he lifted his hand to pinch her but she moved away making him pout.

Siv:Ellaaru iurkkaanga aththaan un vaal eh konjo suruteetu nillu..

Ash:Mudilaye di..apdi irukka nee..

Siv:Adhellaa mudiyu...amidhiyaa iru'thaan..

Ash:Chittuuuu..

Siv:Aththaan.. keep quiet..

Ash:Eii ennaale mudila di..kovil ku laa poga venaa..vaa veetukku poyirlaa..

Siv:Aah.. aasa dha.

Ash:Eii ple..

Sara:Deii..

He got jerked.

Ash:Ammaaa yeppo vandhingaa?

Sara:Adhella irukkattu.. anga unga appa ku mama ku porkalame nadandhirum pola.. po avangala gavani..

Ash:Avanga yedho pannatu po ma..

Sara:Ippo ponenaa unakku oru surprise vachirukken..

Ash(frowns):Surpirse aah?

Sara:Aama ippo poi olunga avangala sangada paduthaama vandile yethunanaa unaku last seat illanaa.. no..

Ashwin grinned widely at her.

Ash:Mummyyyyy..

Sara:Kathaadha avalukku kettaa avlodha..unakkaaga dha po..

Ash:Aiyoo love you dii Saranya..nooru aandukku mela sandhoshamaa iru..

He pinched her cheeks and kissed her left cheek before sprinting away from there.Saranya gulped seeing Sivaangi's look.

Saramv:Aiyo payabulla epdi kothu vittutu poraan paaru..

Sara:Thangammm..enna di pandra Inga ninnutu.. vaa namma poi Poosaari enna pandraaru nu paapo..

Saying she dragged her from there.

And the priest did some Pooja to the van and took evil eyes before breaking the poosanikkai before the van.

Priest:Nalla padiyaa poitu vaanga pa ellaaru..Namma ooru nallaa irukkanu ellaame selippaa irukkanu nu vendeetu vaanga..

Dharma:Seringa saami..

Rajammal:Pinna enna pa ellaaru vandila yerunga nalla neram mudiyardhukkulla kelambuvo..

Pon:Ethana van Ashwin?

Ash:Paa..anju van pa..

Dharma:Appo apdiye family family aah yerikkonga..Yendha bus naalu yerikkonga..pathala naa..

Ash:Pathala naa.. adutha bus thoppu kitta dha ngaiyaa nikkudhu vandhuru phone panni kooptaa..

Dharma:Seri pa..appo yerunga..

All the village people who all for thiruchendhur as their native temple boarded the van and settled inside with their family members.

Ash:Maa enna ma..

Sara:Naan enna da pannuven..un appa dha iluthuttu vandhuttaaru naane en akka kooda irukka mudila nu kaduppule irukken odi poyiru..

Ash:Maa needhane ma surprise nu laa sonna?

Sara:Dei podaa nee vera..indha Lakshmi amma pandra vela idhellaa..avanga dha un maamanaar te pesanum nu solli andha bus ku poyiruchu..naan ippo epdi en akka kooda pesuven?

Ash:Aama adhukku un purushan othukuttu dha maruvela paapaaru..ithaana paeru irukkaanga le avanga kooda pesu..

Sara:Deii ellaaru periyavanga laa irukkaanga da..

Ash:Pinna inga mattu enna... kumari aah neenga?

Sara:Deii enn..

Rajammal:Ashwin..

Ash:Sollu appatha..

Rajammal:Thanni enga da?

Ash:Thanii..deii Kavin thanni enga da?

Kavin signalled him as don't know while speaking over his phone.Ashwin rolled his eyes and turned to ask Sakthi but he was already felt asleep leaning back on his seat with open mouth.

Ashmv:Ivanukku mattu epdi ipdi odane thooko vandhrudhu..

He shooked his head and stood up searching for the water can.

Ash:Mch..enga pochu nu therila appatha.. naan sonnen ellaa van layu can vainga nu marandhuttaanga pola..irunga naan poi driver te solli vera edhaadhu van munnaadi pochu naa adha nirutha solli kekuren..

Rajammlal:Mmm seri kannaa..

Pon:Paathu po pa..

He nodded his head and moved towards the driver seat.

Ash:Anna..

Driver:Sollu thambi..

Ash:Anna namma van edhaadhu munnaadi pogudhaa?

Driver:Aama pa munnaadi dha poitu irukkaanga..

Ash:Appo andha driver number irundhaa vandiye nirutha soldringlaa..inga thanni vakka marandhuttaanga pola..paati ku venu nu soldraanga..

Driver:Dho soldren pa..

Saying he called the another driver and asked him to stop the van across the road side.

Ash:Naan poitu vaangeetu vandhuren ma..

Sara(smiles):Seri da..

He shooked his head smiling by catching the meaning of her smiling and moved towards the another van.

Dharma:Enna pa aachu?

Ash:Thanni can vakka marandhuttaanga aiyaa andha van le..appatha thanni venu nu kettaanga..

Dharma:Aiyo epdi marandhaanunga..inga thanni can door oda saerthu dha pa irukku thookeetu poga mudiyaadhe..

Ash:Ippo enna pandradhu..seri appo oru bottle le mattu pudichuttu poikiren..

Saras:Oru bottle thanni epdi yaa pathu?Nee venaa appatha ve inga vara sollu..

Ash:Epdi ma ingaye yerkanave edam full aayiruchu le?

Suba:Yaarayaadhu maathikalaam pa..

Gowi:Sivu nee poriyaa?

Siv:Naanaa?Naan..naan epdi aththa..adhu..

She looked at her father gulping.

(Lakshmi paati as Laks)

Laks:Yen pulla periyavanga anga thanni illaama epdi avlo dhooro varuvaanga po poi andha bus le iru..

Dharma:Ava adhukku sollala ma..epdi thaniyaa irukkardhu nu neachiruppaa..maa nee po da..paravala paati kaaga dhane?

Siv:Mmm seri pa..Aana..amma neeyu vaayen..

Laks:Ipdi irundhaa laa onnu velaiku aagaadhu lingam..

Dharma smiled at his daughter.

Dharma:Neeyu po Saraswathi..pulla thaniyaa irukkum le?

Saras:Ungalukkaaga poren Lakshmi amma..

Dharma heaved a sigh at his angry wife.

Laks:Enakkaaga ennathukku di porava?Poi thoongunga pesikittu irukkaadhinga..

Saras:Neengalu dhane Rajamma appatha vandha odane pesa poriga..apro engala mattu solla vendiyadhu..

She twisted her lips and both Sraswathi and Sivaangi got down from the van with their luggages.

Laks:Amma maga rendume vaaiyaadi dha..

Dharma chuckled.

Siv:Chithi Amritha ve paathukko..

Suba:Ava thoongittaa pola di kadaisi seat le dha irukkaa..

Ash:Paavo di unga chithi..

He mouthed at her.Sivu suppressed her laugh.

SIv:Seri chithi paathukko bye pa..bye chithapps..

Veera:Paathu da..

Ranga:Bye di chappathi..

Siv:Chithappaa...

All giggled at her whining.

Suruli:En mayan eh paathukka solli oru dhadavayaadhu sonniyaa di?

Siv:Aiyo mama naan avan pera sonnaale endhiruchuruvaa..endhiruchu enna kettaa naa anga kooptu vaa seriyaa?

Maha:Avanga avanga aalu vandha modhala irundhavangala marandhura vendiyadhu..

Siv:Aththa..enn'tha ipdi solleete?

Maha(smiles):Summa di poitu vaa..batharo..

Siv:Haan seri'tha bye mam..(she stopped closing her mouth when Kadhir stirred in his sleep)..

Suruli:Podi bye..

She waved him a bye and the trio moved towards the another van.

Siv:Mch.

Saras:Naanu inga dha da irukken..en munnaadiye en pulla iduppa kildre.. aahn?

Ash:Eeee aththa...enna'tha appo naan un pulla illayaa?

Saras:Ipdi edhaadhu solli samaalichiru..

Ash:Appa?

Pon:Naan pinnaadi oru van varudhu da adhule varen..

Ash:Yen pa?

Pon:Paalswamy laa adhule dha da varaan naan varen neenga ponga..

Ash:Seri pa..

Ponvannan smiled seeing Saraswathi and Sivaangi.

Saras:Epdi naah irukkinga?

Pon:Mmm nallaarken da..nee epdi irukka?

Saras:Nallaarken naah..naan angaye pesalaa nu dha nenachen aana avaru..

Pon(smiles):Paravala da modhala maari irundhirundhaa ellaaru ore idathula sandhoshama irundhirukalaa..vidu da nadakardhu nadakkattu..

Saraswathi and Ashwin smiled at him.Sivaangi frowned.

Pon:Seri da ennaachu yen keela yerangi vandhuttinga..edhaadhu venumaa naan vaangetetu varavaa?

Saras:Illa illa naah..amma ku thanni venu nu kettaangalaame..aana anga door oda attach aagi irukkura thanni can dha irukku..adhaa amma ve inga vara solleetu naanu papa uh anga poro..

Pon:Ohh adhuvu seri dha da..amma thanni kudikkaama irukkave maataanga..

Ash:Amma neenga yerunga naan appave vittutu varen..

Pon:Yen da nee po naan van vandhadhu poikiren..

Ash:Paravala pa..maa neenga poi appatha ve mattu kooptu varinglaa?

Siv:Naan poren naan poren..

Saying she hurriedly walked towads the van.They chuckled seeing her.

Pon:Nalla valathirukka da ponna..

Saraswathi smiled at him.

Siv:Paathu appatha..

Rajammal:Enakku enna pulla..naan laa super aah nadappen vaa..

Siv:Strong paati neenga..

Rajammal:Neeyu enna maari dha irukkanu..paathiyaa epdi gambeeramaa pethu potrukken paaru en pullaya..

She pointed Ponvannan.Sivaangi smiled at her.

Rajammal:Neeyu apdidha pethu podanu..enna?

Siv:Adhukku modhala kalayanam aaganu paati kutty..

SHe pinched her cheek.

Rajammal:Yevadi ava..adhellaa kaalaagalathula nalla padiyaa nadakku..naan irukkan le nee yen kavala padudha...unga rendu peru kalyanathayu naan paathukudhen..

Sivaangi gasped in hsock.

Siv:Paati..

Rajamal:Adhaa hospital le irukkumbodhey sonningle di..neeye avana virumbala naalu unna avanukku katti vakkanu nu dha naanu aasa patten..azhaga irukka chello nee..unna thavara vera yendha sirikki ku en paeran adanga maataan..naan paathukudhen kavala padaadha enna?

Sivaangi blushed and nodded her head and they reached near Ponvannan.

Rajammal:Enna da nee yen yerangeete?

Pon:Illa ma naan pinnaadi vera van le varen..

Rajammal:Ohh..Saraswathi dhane nee?

Saras:Aama ma..epdi irukkinga?

Rajammal:Nallaarken chello nee epdi irukka?

Saras:Nallaarken ma..

Siv:Seri vaanga paati naan ungala van le yethi vidren..

Rajammal:Mmm vaa di thango..

And after making sure that Rajammal settled comfortably beside Lakshmi paati, she came down and Saraswathi and Sivaangi climbed the bus.

Sara:En thanga mayiluu..

Siv:Ammaaaa..

Thye hugged each other smiling wide.

Sara:Oru valiyaa vandhuttiyaa?

Siv:Ella pugalum paati ke..

They giggled.

Saras:Thangaye..

Sara:Eii akka vaa vaa..

After sometime Ashwin came there and the van started to move.

Sivaangi,Saraswathi,Saranya in three seater while Ashwin was behind them leaving one seat inbetween scrolling through his phone.

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TBC...

Epdi irundhuchu??

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