Normally I don't ask for this kinda stuff but today is a special case. Most of you know that last night (or this morning depending on where you all live) I posted my third chapter of my gelato story Love Was Made For Me And You. However this chapter was kind of special for a reason. It was the first time I typed out a chapter and posted the first draft. Usually I prewrite and edit the chapter before I post it but I had an idea and wanted to write it before I forgot. So I want to ask you seasoned authors, for my first time doing something like that how was the chapter? Was it too rushed or did it flow? Did it even make sense? If you guys want to leave me constructive criticism go right ahead I'm just wondering if I should trust myself enough to just post my first draft without nitpicking every little detail like I normally do.