Reviewer: HAPPINESS_IS_YOU_

Reviewee: Ivashkov20

First of all I am so so so so so so so sorry for the delay. It shouldn't have taken so long, but it did.

Hope it helps 😉😉

COVER (7.8/10) 

The cover is simple. So simple that it might not look like eye catching. The colours look soothing but definitely not eye catching, which is really important part of a book. "You can't judge a book by its cover." The statement is true but not completely as cover is one of the most important part to attract readers to a book.I would advise you to find the most important thing or part in your story and use it to create an imaginary picture and just make a cover or ask someone to do it. You can find a lot of people who enjoy making covers so it should not be hard to find someone you like. 

TITLE (9.8/10) 

I really love when the author uses uncommon words for title of a story so there goes some bonus points for you. I have to ask, how did you get the idea of using such an uncommon word for the title of your story?

DESCRIPTION/BLURB (3/10) 

I think you can do better in the blurb or description. There was so little information in the description that I don't think it would attract as much readers as a normal description would.Description, Cover, Title and the Story are the most important things. There is no doubt that the title was good. Great even. The cover was a bit put down but the description is more so. I would advise you to find a good piece of your story and changecit into a mini version of your story, with some information which is not too little and not too much, use some uncommon words to make it more fun and just like you asked questions, ask a question so difficult on the end of it that the reader has to read the book. 

PLOT (8/10) 

The plot was good. But good doesn't means that it wasn't confusing.I actually have mixed feelings for the plot. It's not exactly clear that who is good and who is evil and the 8th letter proved it. I didn't understand a lot of things but there were a few places that we're really good. The letters explain something which looks like a part of past or future, I can't understand.Nonetheless, it was good.

FLOW OF THE STORY (5/10) 

The flow was really.... Disturbing. There were some parts which which didn't make sense at all. The difference between word limit of different chapters was too much. Some letters were so small and explained nothing, and some gave too much information to handle and remember at once. I wouldn't advise you to try to find a word limit range and stick to it.

CHARACTERS DEVELOPMENT (4/10) 

I couldn't see any character development, like none. The only thing I saw was when Rhea was captured, Tina looked a bit evil. And that part doesn't count as character development.I would advise you to build your characters like a human would. Let them face challenges and not always win, The loss would change them and make them better. So try to show their feelings and treat them like a actual living being and not some fictional character.

WRITING STYLE (8.9/10) 

The writing style was amazing. I really enjoyed the author's writing style and that why I think you can do a lot better if you would just focus a bit on the description.There were some grammatical and punctual mistakes so I would advise you to do a second and third check when writing a chapter or ask someone else to do it.GENRE RELEVANCE & TAGS USED (8.4/10)All genres fit the story perfectly except one, I think. I can't say that it won't appear after more chapters are published but as of now, I didn't see any Romance in the story.My only advise would be to add some more tags, just to help your story grow more. 

READER'S ENJOYMENT (9.7/10) 

I saw readers enjoy it a lot. Most of the comments were like 'I can't wait for the next chapter' 'It's growing so good' 'you are so descriptive' and I can't say that I don't agree with them. When reader's enjoy a story, it means it was worth their time and that is the most important thing to achieve.If readers enjoy your story than who am I to judge and advise?

REVIEWERS PERSONAL LIKING (6/10) 

This whole review was based on my liking. What I liked, what I didn't, what made me hold my breath and what stole it. All of this is my own choice and I too am a reader. Every person likes something different so if there is something in the review which is upsetting you then please, do understand that their are a variety of people with their own opinions and they will say otherwise. 

As mentioned in the whole review, I believe that your story has potential and if you follow my advise then your story can be way more better. I am not saying that whatever I said is totally right, you can ask someone else about you book too... Maybe friends or someone and follow their advise. In short words the story was good. But not the best you can give.And now is the time for our grand reveal of your overall marks [according to me]! 

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OVERALL (70.6/100) 

With a small amount of improvement, I am sure you would like to read a story worth your time. Filled with a unique plot and concept, this story is for you!