Reviewer: HAPPINESS_IS_YOU_

Reviewee: Yanzieyy

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COVER (9.7/10) 

 First of all, the cover. I believe the cover is one of the first things which leads a reader to your book. Good cover, greater chance of getting a reader. The cover used was really great. I never thought that red, orange, yellow and brown would get along but clearly I was wrong about it. There's a man in the picture wearing a cloak. We can't see the face but that picture is enough to bring a person's curiosity. There are windows or some open space for windows in the background which leads people to think that it's something like a castle. I like the thing in the middle. I don't know what it is but it looks like a wheel of fire or something which increases the reader's interest.If I had to describe the cover in two words, Beautiful and Mysterious will be my first choice. The font used for the title of the story is beautiful.The only thing I didn't like much was the writers name. I know it's a bit off the track but try to do a name which isn't in short form. Like you can keep the M. & W. but try writing the last M. into full form. Just an advice. 

 TITLE (10/10) 

The title fits the story and people can relate it with the description. The name Atlantia sounds a bit like those worlds situated in some kind of islands in the middle of nowhere. What I mean to say is that the name of the place you choose for the story is great and it's easy to pronounce too so it will be easier for the readers to understand the title with the help if description without giving too much or too less information about the story.

DESCRIPTION/BLURB (7.6/10)

The description was great but I feel like you have given too much information in too little sentences. The description was informative but the way you wrote it was a bit disappointing for me. I have read your writing and I feel like you missed it in the description. Maybe you didn't got idea or simply thought it was enough... I dunno but it was a bit off. Advise if you want to ask me, try to write the description a bit longer than that. Make it at least two paragraphs and with minimum of 4 lines each.. And try to write it in the same way you wrote the story. 

 PLOT (10/10) 

The plot was really great. At the beginning I felt that it was just like Harry Potter. A barely teenager, is thrust into an unknown world filled with magic. But this story is different. It's original and fresh and it makes it unique which is good. Great in fact. 

FLOW OF THE STORY (9.8/10) 

The flow was just perfect. The story was a bit up and down a bit but it was manageable. Most people don't even care about how much information you are giving them at once... I am not saying that the story was happening too fast or slow, it was a bit fast at some places but it wasn't too much for people to notice.Try to maintain the word limit. For example if you are writing 1 to 1.5 k then keep maintaining it. If 1.5 to 2 then that. Or maybe 2 to 2.5... Don't write more than that. Other than these two things everything was perfect.

CHARACTERS DEVELOPMENT (9.8/10) [SPOILER'S ALERT!] 

David, a simple human, or so he thinks, somehow enters a world no one has ever crossed till the war. How does the readers expect him to behave after losing his family nd friends suddenly? The author really described it. It felt like I could feel those emotions.. Incredible. I thought there might be a bit more trust issues for David but it's still great. 

WRITING STYLE (10/10) 

I don't usually read the he/she thing... Just from a person's point of view. But this is the second book I have read here and liked so far which is written in second person's way and it's amazing. You, the author, have used a lot of difficult words which makes this book so much better. The names of the characters are unique and interesting too. Really great. I think I found only a few mistakes here and there which I can count in one hand so really great grammar too. 

GENRE RELEVANCE & TAGS USED (10/10) 

Fantasy - Adventure truly describes this story. There are a lot of tags which makes it easy to find if readers somehow forget the name. Tags are correct too.

READER'S ENJOYMENT (8.9/10)

If the readers like the genre it belongs and then yes. If not then maybe. Its not exactly what I usually read but I am glad I did. 

REVIEWER'S PERSONAL LIKING (9/10) [Don't read this if you don't want to hear my point of view]

WARNING: I BECOME CRAZY WHEN EXCITED! Ohh My Godd! This is epic! I think I fell in love the writing and story a little bit... Okay maybe not so little but you understand it right? This is definitely going to be added in my FAV AND MUST READ reading list! I am angry at this app.... It doesn't give me great books often.. And when it gives I totally forget about it.. Argh! It's so frustrating but I still am here and I love this app so don't mind me blabbering. But the story was truly amazing and it kind of freaked me out when the author asked me to review it.. I kinda fainted too... I dunno. But seriously, me? ME?! Are you serious? I, a simple human... Or maybe alien...? But I am glad I read it and... 

Let's forget that I lost my cool above so... coughs Now's the time for overall rating... Andddddd! 

OVERALL (94.8/100) 

claps loudly 

A must read if you are into fantasy adventure story with a lot of turn and twists... Winks