Reviewer: Iamdel14

Reviewee: unicornlover30dash

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Title: 3/5 

 The title is simple and ok, but it seems unconnected with the chapters. Hope it gets connected later.

 Cover: 3/5

The cover is also too simple for catching the eyes of readers. We know the quote but it's not 100 % right because the reader's first attention is the cover. We need to have a more catchy and attractive cover to get more readers. 

Blurb: 6/10The blurb needs a little bit more informative. Yes, not much information must be given yet it does have to be informative. With clear information of the story, readers will most likely skip. Because for example, we like it when the description of a movie is written very interestingly hiding a lot of plots and when we get to see a movie we are surprised with the plots. Like this, u can twist some parts and make a good blurb.

Opening chapter/ prologue: 8/10 

 The prologue is good even though it is short but I think u can improve more with it. 

 Grammar and vocab: 6/10There's a lot of grammatical and spelling mistakes. I know we make mistakes as English is not our first language. So I suggest u check it once and edit or make an editor edit your book. 

 Writing style: 8/10

I like that simplistic writing style of urs which is easy to get the ideas of the story yet not much losing a good style. But one thing that I would suggest is that making the chapters a little bit more longer. It's too short. Short chapters are good in other ways like short chapters means more no. numbers and that means more views but there a lot of ads between the chapters so I would like u to make the chapters longer. That doesn't mean short chapters r bad but ur chapters r too short. Make it at least 300 to 500 words.

 Character development: 5/10 Due to the short chapters, the story hasn't met the scene where characters start to develop. But I think when u publish more chapters there might be the development.

Plot (like is it interesting and original): 8/10

The short period of that plot is impressive. The aside thing things of ur stories are good! I also admire how u put the pov. Although the plot is a bit common, it doesn't make me bored. Because there's nothing that makes me confused at all. It just moves along with clear and simple details. But something about the emotions, there's a time when I can't feel anything at the part where I should feel something. Other than this, it's all good. 

 Flow: 6/10 

 Disappointment with the flow of the story. There is a lot of skips that need to be shown. I would like to suggest making the scene more detailed to clearly let the story flow. Because there is a lot of jumps from one part to another when it needs to be detailed like for example, the kiss scenes. It's a bit off. 

Genre Relevance: 5/5

Everything is perfect about this part. You really know how to make those Genre relevant. 

 Overall enjoyment: 4.8/5 No boring parts according to me! It's just the preferential style of urs so I can't blame u. I like that u make me feel what's going to happen next and make me ask questions about the characters and yeah sometimes want to talk directly to the characters, lol. I really appreciate ur imaginations of this story. 

 Total: 59.8/90