1) Intersecting Parallels


Reviewer: Diverselyunique

Reviewee: 9Worlds

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Title: 9/10 

It's a really nice title, it's unique and one of a kind ♡it suits the story so well.

Book cover: 5/10 

I like the colors used , I like how they blend and compliment each other very nice color choice... As for the creativity I kinda wish there was more to it, it's nice don't get me wrong, I mean you'd need something that would attract readers... So I'd suggest working more on your cover I'm sorry if I'm offending you in any way I'm just tryna help♡ 

Readers interaction: 15/15 

Okay I just have to say you have the best readers, like oh my gosh I just love how you reply each and every one of them, It's really nice to see that♡ they must really love and appreciate you. Because it's really important for you to have that kind of relationship with your readers ♡ 

Description of the story: 10/10

 I absolutely loved your book description it's very clear and interesting you know, it makes one really eager to read your book heck even I was excited to read your book I just couldn't wait so well done on that one♡♡. Also you kind of left everyone on a cliffhanger you know that right there makes the readers actually more interested ♡and wanting to actually read more on it. 

Grammar and vocabulary: 18/20 

Okay so here's the thing your book was so perfect I had to go back and read it word for word just to make sure ♡, yes there were a few grammar mistakes but other than that it was really good♡. Now let's talk about your choice of words!! Like oh my freaking donkeys I literally loved your choice of words you went BIG!! Big to the point where I had to google a few words lol♡ but overall it was amazing! 

Although I just have a piece of advice for you... Don't over do it... There were some words (I literally find this funny) whereby it took me 5 minutes to try and pronounce... I'm not saying its a bad thing no because it kinda has an advantage, we get to learn new and advanced words you know so thanks for that lol.

Genre relevance: 5/5


Areas author has to improve: 

Just the cover and grammar mistakes ♡ 

Areas author is good at: 

Okay so you're really good at your choice of words just like I said earlier on. 

Writing style: 10/10 

Your story has gaps in between the paragraphs which is good because it actually gives the reader direction ♡.Fonts on point,also used in the correct places so well done on that one 

Your opinion: 

Okay so I really think your book is good even if it was just those few chapters I read I really liked them a lot ♡♡ 

Overall enjoyment: 17/20 

I really did enjoy I'm not gonna lie but I just wish I had read the whole book lol. But anyways, good luck in editing your book ♡♡ 

Total : 89/100

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