This is a rough draft. Not rough as in "spelling/grammar mistakes", but rough in terms of characterization, themes, and story.

I have received criticism that my characters are strangely child-like despite them being ageless gods in dark situations, among other things. I would appreciate more criticism of it.

Yes, despite what that cover may tell you, this book is rather dark, especially as it goes on. If you were looking for a light, fluffy romance, please skip this over.

I am revising this as you're reading this, so expect things to change. Again, this is a rough draft.