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HAPPY BIRTHDAY MY DEAR SISTER Ananyasharma35

THIS ONE IS FOR YOU.

guys this is my first try to write os. Please ignore mistakes. & pardon me.

Let's start......

A house shows. It is decorated like a bride. In a room A girl is crying badly sitting beside the bed.

Yes the girl is Avni. Avni Mehta.

Avni: why god why me always? He proposed me. I also wanted that but now I I can't accept his proposal. Why God... If you want to separate us then why you brings us close.. Why...

Flashback start

A boy is sleeping on his stomach. His sleep gets disturb by the ring of his phone. He pick up his phone from side table still his face not shown. He keeps the phone on his ear.

Boy: hello

Boy 2: hello Neil don't tell you are in bed still?

Neil: what happened Vidyut?

Vidyut: did you forget to day we have lecture at 9. That too Akhil sir's lecture. You know na how is he.

Neil: what is the time now?

Vidyut: it's 8:05 sir.

Neil: what??

Neil gets up from bed with jerk.

Neil: now hung the call I have to get ready bye. See you in the college. Bye bye..

After cutting the call Neil runs to the washroom.

Vidyut: he is crazy. (shaking his head)

After sometime he reach college..

Neil hugs Vidyut..

Neil: what's up?

Vidyut: great. Now let's go we are getting late..

Neil: let's go..

They go to their class.

After one hour their class ends. They come to the canteen. Neil & vidyut sit.

Vidyut: so what will you have?

Neil: only coffee..

Vidyut: ok I am coming after giving the order.

Neil: yup

Vidyut goes to order coffee for them & Neil take out his guitar.

He is about to play in but sometimes attract his attention Or I say someone.

Neil lost in a girl...

First it shows her hair flying in the air then her deep eyes her lips & her mole on her upper lip. The mole attack Neil most...

Neil: wow...

Suddenly he notices Vidyut is talking with that girl. Neil call Vidyut..

Neil: Vidyut

Vidyut: coming..

Vidyut come with coffee..

Neil: (still looking at the girl) who is she?

Vidyut: my neighbours. First year. Come to meet me. You know scared of ragging and all.

Vidyut noticed Neil staring at that girl.

Vidyut: aahhmmm.. Let's go.

Neil: where?

Vidyut: I will introduce you with her.

Neil: no..

Vidyut: what no. Let's go with me.

Vidyut drag him.

Neil: ok ok I am coming.

They come to the girl. The girl stands up from her seat.

Vidyut: let me introduce you both. He is my friend Neil. He is a great singer. & play guitar really well. & she is Avni. As sweet as her name. Neil whenever you will see her you will find her eating chocolate. Right Avni?

Avni smiles.

Neil: hi nice to meet you.

Avni: same here. Will You sing a song please I love songs.

Neil: of course & no need to say please.

Neil starts singing meri pehli mohabbatein

Neil singing looking at Avni. Avni is enjoying the song...

Neil finish the song. Avni claps for him.

Avni: amazing

Neil: thank you.

Then they talk for some time.

Avni: ok bye I have to go now. I have a lecture.

Neil: yeah sure. See you.

Avni: see you.

Avni leaves..

Vidyut: pehli mohabbatein hhhhuuuuhhhh?

Neil blush & hit him playfully.

Like this few days passes.. Neil try to meet Avni every day.

Few days later

Neil comes to the college & meets Vidyut.

Vidyut: bro I introduced you with Avni now you forget me.. Dost dost na raha...

Neil: now stop it...

Neil was opposite to Vidyut.

Vidyut: hi Avni (rising his hand)

Neil turns & rise his hand.

Neil: hel...

Vidyut starts laughing.

Vidyut: what happens bro? Are you scared?

Neil: what? Why I will be scared. Vidyut I don't like this type of joke.. Now let's go to the class we are getting late.

Vidyut: Avni

Neil: again Avni... I told you na that no more jokes about it.

Vidyut: Avni

Neil: what Avni Hmmm what Avni?

Neil turn & shock as Avni was really there. He composed himself.

Avni: hello

Vidyut: hello.

Avni: (looking at Neil) how are you?

Neil: fine. You?

Avni: great.

Neil: how is your classes going on?

Avni: good.

Neil: if you need any help or notes just let me know.

Avni: sure.

Neil: ok bye Avni..

After class..

Vidyut: bro Avni is very good girl but I think there is a problem..

Neil: what problem?

Vidyut: she loves chocolate that much I think she will say I love you anyone for chocolate..

Neil smiles & thinks..

Neil: (whisper) chocolate...

Vidyut: you are gone bro...

Next day

Bela: (one of Avni's friend) this one for you (giving a chocolate)

Avni: chocolate!! For the first time, you are giving me chocolate other day than my birthday.

Bela: I didn't give it to you.

Avni gives her confuse look.

Bela: it was on your table with your name.

Avni: was on my table (frown) there is something written on it.

Avni read it

Avni: chocolate for a sweetest girl..

Bela: who keep it on your table?

Avni: I don't know. But who ever he is I just want to thank him because I looooove chocolate. & I can do any thing for chocolate.

Avni smiles.

Like this Neil gives Avni chocolates every day without making her know that who is giving her those. Avni also enjoy it a lot.

One day

Avni ware a blue dress. She is in library. She was reading. After sometime she goes to get another book.

Neil takes it as opportunity & keeps a chocolate for Avni on her book. & leaves before Avni sees him.

Avni sees it & read the note.

Avni: blue is my favourite color so love for you today is little more.

Other day

Vidyut: today is Avni's birthday.

Neil looks at him & smiles.

After sometime

Avni is sitting with her friends..

Some random boy: hi Avni.

Avni stand up from her seat.

Avni: hi.

Boy: many many happy returns of the day Avni.

Avni: thanks

Avni about to seat then she finds a note with chocolate.

Avni smiles & open it

"Please come to the garden area"

Avni: girls you wait here I am coming soon.

Bela: what happen? Is your secret admirer is send you note with chocolate & call you out side...

Avni: he is not my secret admirer.

Bela: then who is he? Hmmm?

Avni: no one. I am going bye.

Avni: (while coming to the garden area) I hope today you come in front.

Avni smiles & go there. She finds a box there. Avni goes to the box & open it. As soon as she opens the box balloons come out from the box.. A big smile comes on her face. There was a lot of chocolates in the box. & of course a note.

In every special moment of life I am with you always. Happy birthday Avni.

Avni: who is he yaar? You always bring a smile on my face.

Neil sees her from far. Avni goes from there..

Like this 15 day passed

One day

Neil is going to keep chocolate for Avni but he collide with someone & the chocolate with note falls from his hand. Fortunately or unfortunately Avni sees it.

Avneil look at each other. Avni is about to talk to Neil but Bela drag her from there.

Next day

Neil is in library Avni is passing from there she sees Neil & goes to him.

Avni: hi

Neil:(looks at her) hi how are you?

Avni sits opposite to him.

Avni: fine. BTW thank you for the chocolates

Neil: welcome (without looking at her)

Avni: & the birthday surprise was the best surprise of my life.

Neil smiles

Neil: welcome.

Avni: BTW aap ne sirf ak hi din song sunaya or nahi sunaya.

Neil: actually I am not comfortable here. Mujhe itne sounds ki bich song gana accha nahi lagta..

Avni: ok then whenever you want just call me I will come to listen your music.

Neil: but I don't have your number..

Avni smiles & face-palm herself

(ignore the mobile)

Avni: mein bhi na... 9102******3018

Neil save it.

From that day avneil starts meeting every day. Neil sings songs for Avni. Neil use to pick & drop her everyday. They starts talking on phone for hours. Avni's day starts with a good morning message from Neil. They starts knowing about each other. Like Avni loves colourful things, nature, travelling. She hates show off. & Neil loves singing & hates disturbance in his music. Like this they are exploring different things & sides about each other.

One night

Neil pov: Avni,one of the most pronounced words in my mind in the last few days, one of the most pronounced name, smile. The connection I felt in my heart when I saw her for the first time is increasing day by day. Last few days are going as a sweet dream. Tomorrow tomorrow I will tell you everything what I feel about you.. (smiles)

Next day

Neil getting ready for college. Neil is very happy today because he is going to confess his feeling to Avni.

Neil reaches college. Neil search Avni every where but he didn't find her. Neil goes to Bela.

Neil: Bela do you know where is Avni?

Bela: no bhaiya, she hasn't come yet.

Neil: oooh

Neil calls her but her phone was switched off.

Neil: where are you Avni? (rubbing his forehead)You become my habit. I can't live without you.. Please Avni come back...

Neil continuously try to call her but always it shows unreachable.

One week passed

In the morning

Neil phone rings. He sees the caller id. & received the phone immediately.

Neil: hello hello Avni. Where are you since one week? you know how many times I tried to call you? Why your phone was switched off? How are you? God damn it say something.

Avni: I had to come to my home town immediately so I can't inform you. & I was stock in something that's why my phone was off.

Neil: when you are coming back?

Avni: actually I call you to inform that I can't come now. You come here in Jaipur na. I have a surprise for you.

Neil: I don't need any surprise.

Avni: please don't be angry. Please come tomorrow. I am sending you the address.

Neil: I won't come

Avni: please. OK call me when you calm down.

Neil: ok bye.

Avni send him address. Neil see it & throw the phone on bed.

Neil thinks for some time.

Next day

He goes to Jaipur. He saw the whole house was well decorated with flowers & lights.

Neil ask a boy

Neil: yhe Avni ka ghar hai na?

Boy: haa.

Neil: kya ho raha hai yaha?

Boy: shadi..

Neil: shadi...... (frown)

Boy: yes. The wedding of the elder daughter of the family. BTW what do you want?

Neil: I have come to meet Avni.

Boy: come sit here. you wait I am calling Di.

Neil sits & think..

Neil: Neil its her wedding. She invite you for her wedding. Do you really think you can see her to be someone else?? It will be better to leave from here silently for you.

Neil gets up & about to go. Then Avni come. He stops

Avni: I knew it you will definitely come..

Neil just staring her sadly.

Avni: what?

Neil: I came here to surprise you but I myself get shocked by coming here

Avni: why? what happened? What kind of shock you get by coming here?

Neil: that your we....

Before he completed someone interrupted him.

Girl: you are here & I am searching for you in the whole house. Who will help me to get ready? Let's go...

Avni: I will Riya Di. but first let me introduce you with someone. He is Neil I told you about him remember... & Neil she is Riya my elder sister.

Neil: elder sister? As I know you have only one younger brother. Then she...

Avni: yes but..

Riya: I think you don't have idea about joint family. Here cousin sister are also like own sister.

Neil: that that means it your...

Avni: it's Riya di's wedding.

Neil take breath of relief with a smile.

Avni: di do you know he is really fantastic singer.

Riya: really..

Avni: hmmm

Riya: then I am very lucky to have a singer in my wedding. Now the sangit function is going to be super duper hit.

Avni: ok. Now let's go. Get fresh & Take some rest.

Neil go inside. Avni introduced him with her papa, maa, bhai, chacha chahi & dadi. Mehta family welcome him with open heartedly.

Dadi: Avni you take your friend to the guest room.

Ashish: yes. & Neil you get fresh we will talk later.

Neil: yes uncle.

Then Avni take him to guest room. & he gets fresh.

Neil pov: it's almost a heart attack for me when I heard about the wedding. I thought it's Avni's wedding.. O god I was almost dead on the spot. But thank god its her sister's wedding not her...

At night

Avni is in Riya's room. Suddenly her phone beeped..

Avni take her phone & see it's Neil's message.

Message: tonight the shine of moon is different..
Will you come to the terrace now?

Avni look at Riya who is busy in her phone. She gets up from the bed..

Riya: what happens? Where are you going at this time?

Avni: aa aa ab kitchen. To get water.

Riya: the water jar is already here on the side table.

Avni: oooh OK I didn't notice it.

She sits. After few minutes she again gets up?

Riya: what?

Avni: I remember something maa told me to do. I am just coming doing the job.

Avni doesn't wait for her reply & go from there.

Riya just looks at the direction of door.

Avni come to the terrace & find Neil standing there back facing her.

Neil: Maine poocha chand se
Ke dekha hai kahin
Mere yaar sa haseen
Chand ne kaha chandini ki kasam
Nahin, nahin, nahin

Neil say the song like poetry.

Avni smiles.

Avni: how do you know that I am here?

Neil: your Heartbeat tells me that you are here.

Avni blush..

Avni: don't you think you become filmy nowadays?

Neil turns to her..

Neil: absolutely not...

Avni: leave all this & tell why do you call me here at this time?

Neil: Avni I I have something for you.

Avni: what Neil?

Neil gives her a box

Avni: what is in it?

Neil: open it & see for yourself.

Avni: ok let me see (while opening the box)

Neil is staring her.

Avni: wow Neil thank you thank you thank you so much. (in excitement she hugs him) thank you for the chocolates. (Neil smiles, Avni is still hugging him)

Then Avni realize her position & break the hug immediately & look here & there feeling awkward.

Avni: I I am sorry actually in excitement....

Neil: it alright Avni no big deal. You can hug me.

Avni blush.

Avni: ok good night

Avni turns to go.

Neil: are you really going??

Avni turns to Neil.

Avni: not for forever just for now.

Avni leave Neil holds his chest on left side.

Neil: Hayeeee....

Like this days passes

The day before Riya's wedding. Everyone enjoining. Suddenly Neil's phone rings. Neil smiles seeing the caller id. He receives the call.

Neil: hello bro how are you?

Vidyut: I am great. You tell me did you confess your feelings to Avni.

Neil:(while looking at Avni) no yaar.. I think it is not the perfect time..

Vidyut: bro don't wait for perfect time. Every time is perfect if your feelings are true. So it is the peak time. Do it bro.. Don't think too much Just proposed her.

Neil: are you sure I should do it now.

Vidyut: 200%. If today you won't do it then I will propose her..

Neil: don't you dare..

They both laugh.. (from far Avni gives him "what happened" look)

Neil just shakes his head.

Neil: ok bro tonight I am going to propose her.

Vidyut: all the best bro.

Neil: thanks bro.

At the evening

Everyone is busy in wedding.

Neil: Avni please come with me.

Avni: where?

Neil: come you will get to know.

Neil drag her & take her to the terrace.

Avni: why do you take here? I have to hide jiju's shoes.

Neil: weather is too good na..

Avni: you take me here to talk about the weather... Like seriously Neil...

Neil: no. OK Avni I don't know what to say... So I am coming to the point ok..

Avni: say it quickly.

Neil: ok

Neil bend down & sit on his knees..

Neil: Avni I I I love you Avni. Will you marry me...

Time stop there for Avni.

Neil: look Avni I know that you also feel the same for me.

Tears starts rolling down from her eyes.

Neil: Av...

Avni runs from there crying. Neil becomes shocked.

Neil: Avni listen Avni... Avni please listen to me.

But Avni don't stop she directly goes to her room & lock the door. Neil also comes behind her.

Neil: Avni Avni open the door please. At least say something. If you don't love it's OK but open the door. Please...

Flashback end

Neil is also crying outside the door. Then someone keeps hand on his shoulder. He turns & sees it's Neela.

Neil hugs her & starts crying loudly.

Neil: aunty Avni Avni isn't opening the door...

Neela: Neil you come with me.

Neil: but Avni..

Neela: you come with me I will see her after sometime. Give her some space & private time to spend with herself.

Neil goes with Neela in her room.

Neil: aunty trust me I I love her so much. & saw the same love in her eyes. But if she doesn't love me then no problem, I will be her friend for forever. I am ready for it but you told her na not to stop talking to me. I can't bare it. I am dying. Dying every second.

Neela: she also loves you.

Neil: then why she is behaving like that..

Neela: because she thinks if she dies you will be shatter.

Neil: why she is thinking about death.. Why this topic is coming here.

Neela: because she has hole in her heart.

Hearing this, Neil's world stops on that moment. Just one sentence is playing in his ears again and again

Neil: no this can't happen. I don't believe it. This is impossible.

Neela: Neil it's true.

Neil: no

Neela: Neilll

Neil: my can't die. She can't..

Neela: Neil control yourself..

Neil: no it's not true it can't be true.. (he is again & again saying the same thing)

Neela: Neilll (she slapped him to bring him in sense)

After a lot of crying.

Neil: when when you get to know about it.

Neela: just few days ago. She suddenly fallen sick we admitted her in the hospital. After seeing her reports doctor said that she has hole in her heart. Any thing can happen any time.

Neela is also crying.

Neil: isn't there any treatment?

Neela: there is only one treatment surgery. But there is no guarantee of her survival after the surgery also. There are only 20% chances of her survival. Anything can happen on operation theater. That's why she doesn't want the surgery. She wants to live as long as she can & enjoy life.

Neil: 20% na. I am sure she will be fine. She will live she will enjoy her life fully with us.. First I have to make her confess her feelings. You talk to the doctor. I will make her agree for the surgery. & I have full faith in my love that it will get it's goal definitely.

Neela nodes & smiles with teary eyes.

Next day

Neil: Avni I know about your health problem. About the hole of your heart. But still I want to Marry you. Live my life with you.

Avni: Neil why do you understand that I can't I can't involve myself in any relationship. I can't ruin your life. I can't play with your emotions. When I know that there is no future of this relation then why I will drag you into my dark life. There is a bright future waiting for you but I I don't know when my journey will be stopped.

Neil: there is no future without you.

Avni: that the reason that the reason I don't want to involve in any relation with you. Because I know after my death you will break down. So it's better to forget each other. & move on Neil. Please try to understand Neil my heart beat can stop anytime.

Neil: to me it doesn't matter Avni how long your heart will beat. To me the matter is that your heart beats for me or not.. So tell me is your heart beats for me? Keep your on my head & say it. remember one thing if you lie you will see my death body.

Avni: Neil what is all this I am telling you na that I don't love.

Neil: ok then what's the problem in saying it keeping your hand on my head. Just say you have no feelings for me.

Avni: Neil

Neil: say it Avni

Avni: (shout) ok then listen I love you & my heart beats only for you. (squeeze her eyes). Happy now.

Neil smiles.

Neil: very much.

Neil hugs her.

Neil: I love you Avni

Avni: I love you too Neil.

Neil: I want to marry you as soon as possible.

Avni: no Neil I can't ruin your life.

Neil: you will ruin my life if you don't marry me. I will kill myself today if you don't marry me. I don't want this life. (calmly) I wants to live with you in every moment you live. OK tell me what if I had this problem then what do you do? Will you let me go will you move on in your life? Hmmmm? Say it?

Avni: no..

Neil: then please Avni marry me please. (sitting on his knees)

Avni: ok I will now get up.

Neil gets up & hugs her tightly. He places a kiss on her forehead.

Soon they get married.

In their first night

Neil: Avni I want a gift from you.

Avni: what do you want from me Neil? What is mine is your also. I am all yours.

Neil smiles.

Neil: promise you you won't say no.

Avni: what is this Neil?

Neil: promise me.

Avni: ok I promise I won't say no. Now tell me what do you want?

Neil: please agree to surgery..

Avni shocked..

Avni: no no I I can't..

Neil: please Avni for me. You trust me right?

Avni just nodes

Neil: then please say yes. & don't forget your promise you made to me.

After a long conversation she say yes for the surgery.

Avni: ok I fulfill my promise now yours turn to give me gift.

Neil: tell me what do you want..

Avni: make me yours in every means Neil..

Neil: Avni but..

Avni: no ifs no buts.

Neil: it can be harmful for you.

Avni: no Neil you can't harm me. Please Neil.. I don't know I will be survive or not so before surgery I want to be your in every means.

Neil: Avni please don't say that. I am 200% sure we will live our life happily. & we will have 2 kids. A Princess & a Prince..

Avni smiles

Avni: me too want to live with my happy family. But still I want you tonight.

Neil doesn't say no to her & they become one in every sense.

After one week

Avni's operation day

Avni: Neil if anything happens to me you will move on in your life.

Neil: Avni nothing will happen?

Avni: no Neil promise me..

Neil: Avni...

Avni: promise me Neil.

Neil: ok. (in mind) Avni you are my first love & you will be the last. You are my heartbeat & how can someone move on without his heartbeat.

Avni: I love you Neil

Neil: I love you too wifey

Tears escape from their eyes.

Avni is taken to the OT. Neil is roaming to & fro

Neela keep her hand on his shoulder. Neil looks at her.

Neil: maa she will be fine na.

Neela: yes baccha she will. After all your love is with her.

Ashish hugs Neil. After 3 hours doctors come out. Neil runs to them

Neil: doctor how is my wife?

Doctor: operation is done but the patient isn't responding with the treatment. We won't give you false hope be ready for everything. Anything can happen.

Everyone one becomes shocked & sad.

Neil: can can I can I meet her? Please..

Doctor: ok I am allowing you but be careful.

Neil: ok doctor.

Neela keeps her hand on his shoulder & blink her eyes to assure him everything will be fine.

Neil goes inside.. He sits beside Avni.

Neil: Avni please yaar don't angry me. Don't force me to be rude. I'm telling you wake up. Being a good wifey listen to me & wake up. Otherwise I I I won't talk to you.

Neil can't hold any more. Tears starts rolling down from his eyes.

Neil: wifey please wake up.

Neil takes her hand & keep on his heart.

Neil: Avni you are my heartbeat. If you if you don't wake up my heartbeat will be stopped. Please for your hubby & our family wake up please.

Neil is crying holding her hand on his chest. Then he feels something. He looks at Avni's hand & sees Avni's hands is moving.

Neil becomes happy

Neil: (shout) doctor doctor..

Doctor come.

Neil: doctor Avni is moving her hands.

Doctor check Avni.

Doctor: it's a miracle. She is the first patient of mine who is recovering from that condition.

Neil smiles.

Doctor: nurse take care of her. & informs me when she comes in senses.

After sometime Avni regain her consciousness. Whole family is very happy.

After 15 days Avni come back home.

One day At home

Avni: thank you Neil. if you weren't with me I would die..

Neil: ssshhhh. Don't say it. I won't do anything.

Avni: no Neil. It was your heartbeat which makes my heart to beat. As they beats for each other. So thank you so much.

Neil: ok if you want to thank me then give me sweet return gift.

Avni: tell me what you want?

Neil: one sweet kiss from my wifey.

Avni blush

Neil comes close to her. Soon their lips meet. Its shows the pure love between them.

Neil use to sing song for Avni every day. Everyday evening they sit with coffee & guitar. Neil use to sing & Avni enjoy the music which is only for her.

After three years they blessed with twin. A baby boy & a baby girl. Baby boy like Avni & baby girl like Neil.

Avneil with Adit & Anvi


Adit Neil Khanna & Anvi Neil Khanna

They live happily ever after.

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