(*Sugardropcandy watches PewDiePie to get reference for story and browse some used puns)

Frisk's POV

"Oh dear! Are you alright?" The goat lady said

"Um.. I'm okay I guess.." I said i rubbed my head alittle

"Do not be afraid my child I am Toriel caretaker of the ruins and also the the leader." She said

"okay I am Frisk .......A human who fell down..." why did I said that of she attack me u'm dead

"Oh okay....." she said it became awkward after I said that

"What an idiot.... guhhh" the voice said

"Well my child come and follow me I will show you the ruins!" she said she ran first to the next big doorway thingy

"go ahead human its like there's no way to stop this timeline mwahahahaha!" flowey said ashe got sucked to the ground

"don't mind the traitor go on just go!" the voice said i can't this ghost thing

"who are you!?" i said

"the real question is who are you!" the voice said

"my name is frisk if you want to know!"

"I'm just a part of your imagination frisk! but if you really want know my name is...... heh you don't need to know because you already know!" the voice said as it fade away

i walked to the door way thingy and toriel is at the top of the stairway i walked forward to a ros- wait these are not roses

"oh dear you look like your confused!" toriel giggled

"those are red leaves my child!" she said then i nodded i touched a shiny star and saved my file

"Frisk is filled with determination" the voice said again

i walked my way up

"in the ruins there are a lot of puzzles you'll come across but i have labeled some for you!" she did the pressure plate puzzle and pulled the lever which opened the door

"come my child to the next room!" she said i went to the next room

"so how are you? you missed me?" the voice said

"leave me alone!" i said

"are you okay my child?" she asked giving me a confused look

"oh yes i just like talk to myself! You know its so fun..." i said

"sometimes i worry about you.." she said

we continued walking

"in this room i want you to filp that lever" she pointed

"okay!" i walked over and I flipped the lever

"okay filp the one on the left!" she said as i walked over i heard the voice again

"no! flip this one!" a ghost like finger appeared

"nope nope nope nope!" i flipped the other one

"good job little one i'm so proud of you!" she walked to the next room

"she does know that i'm a teen right?" i asked

"well how old are you?" the voice asked

"i'm 14 bro!" i said

"i'm not your bro -_-" she said as it fades away i walked my way to the other lever and try to pull it

*frisk tried to pull the lever but nothing happend

nothing happened

i walked to the other room and toriel was waiting for me

"my child since you are living here some monster might attack you..... like what happened earlier." she said

"of course you must not let them harm you. when you come across a monster you will enter a fight. but you do not want to hurt them do you? you can ACT. just strike up a conversion. in this way you don't have to kill. try talking to this lifeless dummy!" she finished her long line

i walked my way there to the dummy my vision changed

there are four buttons in front of me FIGHT, ACT, ITEM and MERCY. i pressed the act button and there are 2 option *check and *talk i pressed talk

"i like your uh.... eyes i think..." i said

"your talking to a dummy..." the voice said

"i'm talking to a ghost!" i said quitely

"Not bad frisk i'm starting to think your smart" she said

*you talked to the dummy toriel seems happy

"i proud of you young one!" toriel said and my vision went back to normal

i walked to the next room

"follow me my child!" toriel said

as i followed toriel a monster went to attack me it was froggit

i pressed Act, before i was able to press anything toriel went to my vision

"froggit please leave her alone..." toriel said

froggit ran away

we continued walking as we walking i saw a floor with that spike things

"oh sheet of paper!" i said making sure that mom doesn't get made at me

"hold my hand as we walk please!" she said we reached the end

we continued to go to the next room

"my child be back i have to go for a while." toriel said

"where?" i asked

"leadership things and i have to leave you here for a while, but as award for being good i'll give you a cellphone, just call me okay see you for a while.." she walked for a while

i sat down and waited for something

"Wow that is one old phone if i ever saw one....ugh why don't you explore!" the voice said

"you do it i'll stay" i said

"i can't! i'm like attach to you!"

"fine okay let's explore!"

minutes (hours?) passed

"is that a ghost?" i asked

"maybe"

"we should move him" i said and i moved him by force

my vision changed it said his name is napstablook i pressed check he seems his have a bad time he seem so sad and started crying and he hit me

"no let me control" the voice said making the voice have a physical form she's kinda younger than me she's wearing a green dress

she swing her knife to the ghost lowering his hp until

"you do know that you can't kill ghost cause there kinda dead already. and i'm just lowering my hp just for you two. bye!" he said

minutes has passed

i went to another room and saw mom

"frisk how did you got here! And what is that on your neck" she stayed quiet

"follow me my child i have some things for you!" she said we came across a house i touched the determination star and saved

*frisk is filled with determination

i entered the house and the smell of cinnamon and butterscotch made me smile

"my child i know that it's not much but-"

"thanks mom i love to stay with you!" i said as tears went down her face

"that's a nice thing to hear!" she said and she hugged me

"oh we just got started! follow me!" she said we walked to another room at the first door

"a room of your own i hope you'll like it!" she said

i yawned

"oh you must be very tired go to sleep then my child.." she said and i entered the room and drop dead at the bed and slept

But i felt somthings wrong i woke up and looked at the mirror and looked at my neck there was a black thing on my neck i touched it and it felt like a brusie it hurts i hope this isn't major or something

Voice's Pov

I kept looking and watching over frisk hm..... why did her determination woke me up? I have to keep watching for clues

Note: some of the old chapter will be replaced by new ones so take note 😅