☠︎ Haunted Ink | Winners ☠︎

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Now for the results everyone has been waiting for! We have had a blast hosting this themed contest & hope that everyone had fun just like we did!

We look forward to doing another successful contest next year!

Please be patient as we roll out all your prizes.

🕸 Tԋιɾԃ Pʅαƈҽ

☠︎  Whispers from Beyond by AuthorUhasa

☠︎ Story Title: 5/5

☠︎ Content: 6/10

☠︎ Spooky Element: 5/10

☠︎ Engagement: 7/10

☠︎ Creativity: 6/10

☠︎ Vocabulary: 5/5

☠︎ Writing Style: 4/5

☠︎ Grammar: 5/5

Total: 43/60

Review: Just a perfect title how it matches in the end when he whispers. The story engages well but again the flow was disrupted because of those emojis. Your writing style is awesome but wasn't spooky because of the emojis now and then.

This is definitely a good story with a unique ending but those emojis didn't let the spotlight shine on it. I hardly found any grammar errors and the writing style was top notch.

Those emojis just ruined the flow sadly, I suggest you to remove them and edit this once again and its ready!!

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🕸 Sҽƈσɳԃ Pʅαƈҽ

☠︎ Surrender by bluerosegem

☠︎ Story Title: 5/5

☠︎ Content: 9/10

☠︎ Spooky Element: 8/10

☠︎ Engagement: 9/10

☠︎ Creativity: 10/10

☠︎ Vocabulary: 5/5

☠︎ Writing Style: 5/5

☠︎ Grammar: 4/5

Total: 56/60

Review: 'Surrender' just means how he has to surrender to the demonic entity. Very spooky! The content, I have no words for; just mind blowing. The story engages so well to the reader that they can feel the flow and actions alongside it in pace.

The vocabulary and writing style is top notch. Your descriptions were just awesome. I also hardly found any mistakes which was good.

This is the type of short story I'd read with my cup of coffee.

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☠︎ Echoes of the Past by AnushkaARMY13

☠︎ Story Title: 3/5

☠︎ Content: 10/10

☠︎ Spooky Element: 9/10

☠︎ Engagement: 10/10

Creativity: 9/10

☠︎ Vocabulary: 5/5

☠︎ Writing Style: 5/5

☠︎ Grammar: 5/5

Total: 56/60

Review: I loved this piece of writing and the message of how love wins over anything. I have a suggestion maybe you can change the title "echoes of past" to something creative that suits perfectly to the story. Otherwise this is amazing!!

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And without further ado, our best spookiest story of the month;

🕸 ɾʂƚ Pʅαƈҽ

☠︎   A Spirit In Me by ReginaWhite0202

☠︎ Story Title: 4/5

☠︎ Content: 10/10

☠︎ Spooky Element: 10/10

☠︎ Engagement: 10/10

☠︎ Creativity: 10/10

☠︎ Vocabulary: 5/5

☠︎ Writing Style: 4/5

☠︎ Grammar: 4/5

Total: 57/60

Review: This was such a gripping short story from start to finish. I was engulfed from the get-go. I was definitely feeling a little spooked from this story. A few tiny errors but nothing an edit can't fix! What a wonderful piece! Well done!

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🕸 Thanks again to everybody who entered this contest! We are grateful for the chance to read all these scary stories! Here's to next time! 🕸

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