Rating: ****/ stars! Congrats, I really enjoyed your story! I may even read on. ^_^

First off, I'm sorry this review took like a week.
What I liked: Description. 4/5 Your description is good, but not great. Still, it is better than about 90% of writers on Wattpad(; so keep up the good work.
S/G: 4/5 the only thing that frustrated me was that on the paragraph that begins with, "Archie had never met.." The paragraph is a whole sentence. That should never be the case. You need to check the grammar with that sentence or maybe divide the sentences. I think it may be a run-on, but I am not sure.

Likeability: 5/5 stars. I really enjoyed this book!

Creativity: 4/5 stars -It reminded me of I am Number 4.

Good hook in 2nd chapter. I do love your words.

What I didn't like: So he takes medication for panic attacks? That's a little unclear to me. I'm guessing it has something to do with him being you know. (; I really didn't dislike anything.

Pointers: Keep on writing and don't forget to add your character's depth. (;
saphlua