Hello again!

Things I've been working on in the past day:
-Successfully rewritten the plot up to chapter 4
-Added more personality to Noctus, Kludd, Marella, Soren, and Mrs P
-Revised the total overarching point of the story and decided which direction I want it to go
-Read about the Security Breach Patient 46 theory
-Slowed story progression down A LOT; it was just WAY too fast previously. I want readers to be able to breathe, too.