Grim:hello this is grim and today review will be a OC story that was made by izzysalt. This is the first story that I read from her when I was recently new on wattpad. I'm not really interested in OC stories back then because I was only interested in crossovers, but when I saw this story I just checked out to how it would be. But to let you know, the story was originally called "rottmnt oc story" when I first found it, but I think it's neat that she changed the titles of her stories. As for this story, let's get started on talking about Mayhem in New York City.

Grim: the story of the rottmnt is basically the same story but it with an OC named Elizabeth miller but she's called Lizzie for short. And she has a connection to the ninja turtles, which they were not only experimented by him both she was there since the beginning and it's weird that they never bought up about her being there with the turtles when they were mutanted. Is like she's just there when it happens and I think people would see this as "oh,there was also a cat in there somewhere but she's not important". Speaking of which, usually in OC story they're usually just add on in stories but they are many of them where they are headcannon characters or have a point of being there, which I mean by that is they affect the story. Which Izzy has been trying to do with her OC stories, which are a bit hit or miss for me. Lizzie in this story I got to say....I really like,she has write a diary at times when she talks about the adventures she has with the brothers. Her weapon is a the one that was meant for donnie but he's doesn't want it because he has his tech bo and he's prefer his tech,so Lizzie took it instead and give it electric powers is a neat choice for her to give because it is connected to machines but does she do to change the story? well she has became a love interest for Leo, which out of the brothers I feel like he would be the one to get a girlfriend in the original show. Also is ironic that Leo has a OC love interest that is named Liz. Because there's an TMNT 2012 OC that is Leo's girlfriend and also named Liz.

Grim: which it be interesting to see these two to meet eachother and probably be bff..... only thing that would get them to hate eachother is they would fight over Leo. But in the story when they meet big mama,she reveal about Lizzie mother being still alive and working with her.later on, Lizzie went out to find her mother to hope to see her again and later on in the story,we find out that her dad is......repo mantis.....

Grim:I wonder if this was before or after they were turned into mutants?eh, they have made her at one point. She also has made some friends when her and donnie went to April's school, which her new friends are a rock band.why are they a rock band? because Izzy love music. The band have members who are also OCs by izzy and their names are Kim, Sophie and Rebecca.they get to be apart of the team later in the story but Rebecca started as a villain for awhile, where she has joined the purple dragons for a bit at the chapter "breaking purple", Lizzie try to redeem her in the chapter "Repairin' the Baron and dragon" then Rebecca then has mutanted into a BAT MONSTER....... crazy but cool.after she fly off, donnie went after her and try to get help out and turn good by.... singing a song. Which I enjoyed theses songs that she put in her OC stories but I'm just wondering if she has grown up with this pop and musical songs and she has decided to use them her stories because on that. So that's the review of mayhem in New York City and I think it's might be her best one so far than her newer ones,so next time we'll be looking at a video that was requested by KaijuLord54