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░﹐ᶻᶻ꒰⋆ Name: Khaliqah Azima ๋࣭ ᵎᵎ 𓂋✦ .

░﹐ᶻᶻ ꒰ Dream tag: LadyBethany ᭪ 𓂋 ✦ .

░﹐ᶻᶻ ꒰ The author: I love 'A Song of Ice and Fire' and the other books of that universe by George RR Martin. After watching House of the Dragon, I read 'Fire and Blood' and fell in love with it. That's why, I decided to write a fanfiction. .ᐟ 𓂋 ✦ .

░﹐ᶻᶻ ꩜𓂃Current Status: Ongoing ⑅ོ+ September 1st 2024𓂋 ✦ .

░﹐ᶻᶻ Genre: Fanfiction 𓂋 ✦ .

░﹐ᶻᶻ Chapter Count: book ongoing  𓂋 ✦ .

░﹐ᶻᶻ Mature/LGBTQ Themes: Yes (LGBTQ is not the main theme. There are some characters who belong to LGBTQ community) 𓂋 ✦ .

░﹐ᶻᶻ Highest Dream Ranking: #963 in got (1 Sep, 2024) 𓂋 ✦ .

░﹐ᶻᶻ Protagonist(s): Aemond Targaryen and Naerys Velaryon (Naerys is an OC) 𓂋 ✦ .

░﹐ᶻᶻ Dream Summary: An evil eye had fallen on the peace and the prosperity of the seven kingdoms. The royal court was divided into two factions - 'The Greens' and 'The Blacks'. The seeds of war sown long ago were sprouting.

Naerys Velaryon was the daughter of Princess Rhaenyra Targaryen and Ser Laenor Velaryon. The Gods tied her fate with Aemond Targaryen, her mother's half brother. The match was liked by few and disliked by many.

The events in their lives were orchestrated by the Gods. But what did the Gods plan? Whose side will Naerys and Aemond choose when war arrives at their doorstep? Which bonds will be mended and which bonds will be broken? 𓂋 ✦ .

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🗝ㅤ۫ Promoted by: n1lyyx ‹𝟹
🗝ㅤ۫ Voted by: n1lyyx‹𝟹
🗝ㅤ۫ Review by: Elixyzsss‹𝟹
🗝ㅤ۫ Chapter cnp by: n1lyyx ‹𝟹
🗝ㅤ۫ Notes: It was interesting to read, it's not really my type of genre, but it was still something nice to read. ‹𝟹

❝ ⌗ . Short Feedback on the first chapter . ⁺

The first chapter effectively captures the tension and intrigue surrounding Rhaenyra's newborn, with well-drawn character interactions and a clear sense of setting. The dialogue between Queen Alicent and Ser Criston Cole builds anticipation and adds depth to their characters, particularly Alicent's suspicions and bitterness.

Improvements Needed: The narrative slows down during the detailed descriptions of the baby's appearance and the history of characters like Ser Lucamore. Consider streamlining these parts to maintain the story's momentum. Some of the dialogue could be tightened to sound more natural, especially in the formal exchanges. 

Overall, the chapter sets up future conflicts well and leaves room for character development, but could benefit from a bit more focus and tightening.

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