NO ONE KNOWS MY HEART LIKE YOU BY: Eternallove-

cIeopatras: Okay, so from my first impression, the cover doesn't match the story at all. I mean, this is the Vampire Diaries, that's a very dark show and I feel like the cover should represent that! I feel like splitting the playlist, cast, and credits into three separate partes was unnecessary, normally I just squeeze all of that into one part! Since you split it, it might seem mislead and make your book look like it has more chapters than it does! Also, I feel like the chapters should be longer because when I was reading the first one, it just felt like it was one quick swipe and it was done! So definitely work on that, because personally, I prefer longer chapters! I usually never post anything under 1k words! Also, again this is kind of a personal preference, but if this is a serious story, third person would probably suit it better because in my opinion, first person just generally makes a story look less professional!