xiv. FACELESS

FACELESS BY: orchidals

queerira: To start this off, I apologize for the long wait! Once again, I've been and the admins have been a little busy lately. But, I'm here now. First of all, I love this concept so much, it's really good, I was truly shook. The prologue made me very emo and it was great. Your descriptions are perfectly fine and for sure help the reader imagine what's going on in your story. There wasn't really any spelling/grammar/punctuation mistakes, but it's always good to go back and check. This was a little short but there isn't really much to say because I would just be repeating myself on how good your story is KSMMSNSN. Anyways, I hope you go a long way with this and I hope more people read it! Check it out guys. 

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