x. THERAPY FOR SOULS
THERAPY FOR SOULS BY: AsToldByFeb
queerira: So, I actually really like the concept of your story! It seriously hooked me in & along with your writing! Your descriptions are decent & it doesn't drag or go over the top. I also love that it has a supernatural theme to it & how it would maybe be like if someone were to die? If that makes sense. There was maybe minor punctuation mistakes not that big & there wasn't any spelling mistakes. The dialogue is also at a good amount. To wrap this up, your story is good! I can tell how inspired & dedicated you are to it which is always a great thing. Keep up the good work!!
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