HAMARTIA BY: uneffusive

queerira: For starters, I've never really read any history based on the French Revolution & reading your story interested me in it! I love your concept so much! And I love how there's slight comedy during this clearly rough time for Luke, I guess to brighten up things? There wasn't actually any spelling or punctuation mistakes, so that's good! The dialogue is at a decent amount and it isn't a drag at all. Anyways, you're obviously doing pretty well with this story and I hope more people discover your book because history mixed with fiction is so intriguing & cool!