COVEN BY: -juniormint-

radsweetheart: Initially, I like your description of the book. I can see where the plot is going, it has a lot at the moment but I can see it being explained and played out later on. There are a lot of spelling, grammatical, minimal punctuation errors but revising and editing can help a lot! I don't watch the show Riverdale, I saw a few episodes but, I can see how you tie it together very well. From the description and the first two chapters, I see that there will be a lot going on soon and there is already but, like I've said before, it should play out. Moreover, I like where the story is going and how there is suspense and I like the dramatization. I say to keep writing/updating and revise, revise, revise!