TASTES LIKE ECSTASY BY: knockoutlou

queerira: Wow, okay. So your story so far really blew me away?? The descriptions are actually amazing & so poetic. It was all beautifully written & I can seriously see how dedicated you are to writing! There was probably 1-2 minor mistakes? No spelling or punctuation mistakes though, just the spacing of some paragraphs! I love that you're showing how Calum is battling depression & you're explaining how he feels but in a very poetic way. And I love that you make sure to ask others for help just in case you write something incorrectly about a person battling depression! Which is a great thing because most people on Wattpad don't really know how to write mental illnesses well. Also, I loved all your graphics! Really pretty. Some of the quotes you wrote really hit me hard & they were extremely deep & detailed. Other than that, this story is pretty solid! I hope you continue more & I hope more people read it!!