ROMEO BY: XLifeNotAsWeKnowItX

queerira: I've never read this type of story before but yours was really interesting!! Your descriptions are amazing, it's not too much and it really helps the reader visualize what's happening in your story. There was maybe about 2-3 punctuation mistakes, extremely minor though. You also describe your characters really well!! And you also know how to hook in your readers because I was extremely into your story. I also love that you add some comedy into it and you wrote a decent amount of dialogue and didn't drag it on. All of your graphics are really great too!! I see that you're doing pretty well with this book and I hope you continue and do even more successful because you clearly will!!