SHUNNED BY -cosmicals

Alright, so, for starters, the plot is so so so amazing! I love this concept! And I love all the little small summaries, aesthetics and layouts before the actual chapters! Really clever. And I love that it's kind of based on multiple things at once? If that makes sense? There weren't really any grammar mistakes, I think there was maybe one spelling mistake or so? Probably not, it's either that or just some words look similar/wrong to me. So don't take that to offensive! It's really descriptive and the dialogue is decent and at a good amount. Not too much and not too little. Also, I love that at some parts it's a little suspenseful. I love your main character too, she's awesome and I can see a lot of cool af stuff coming her/this stories way! Keep up the good work :')) !!