Role Swap Results
At long last, the results for Role Swap are ready to reveal! Below are the score and the judges' feedback for each entry. They are listed in random order, save for the winning entries, which are at the bottom. We hope you've all enjoyed participating in the contest!
Conspiracy Falls (69/100):
Conspiracy Falls is, in its core, a good story. It's great to see the author stepping out of the original plot created by the AU's creator in order to find her own ways to experiment. In her characters, however, we found flaws - the Candy/Robbie subplot is squirm-worthy, Dipper feels derivative of other characters, and the remaining characters are barely touched upon. If the author develops her characters more, Conspiracy Falls could be a great story rather than a good story. Thank you for entering, lilmissbeaniechild, and we hope this feedback helps!
Archives Falls (80/100):
Archives Falls is an a great piece of fiction. Its writing is interesting and the author's ideas of how to experiment with the plot is intriguing. In the characters however, we found them a little bit generic in how the author has chosen to execute their personalities. Still, they're well-developed and have great potential to grow as the author continues to write them. Thank you for entering, misstoriparanormal, and we hope this feedback helps!
Reverse Falls - A Gravity Falls AU (75/100):
Reverse Falls - A Gravity Falls AU is an absolutely adorable take on the Reverse Falls AU. The author has given Pacifica and Gideon wonderful characterization that blows other fanfictions based on the same AU out of the water. We instantly became attached to the flawed but still wonderful duo. Our main qualm was that the plot revolves too much around the canon plot, but with the characters that you've built, it has incredible potential. Still, the writing is easily readable and keeps you engaged throughout the story.. Overall, this story is highly enjoyable and we're excited to see more from you. Thank you for entering, Lucy-the-Cat, and we hope this feedback helps!
Anti-Gravity (81/100):
Anti-Gravity is truly a wonderful story. The characters are adorable, well-developed, engaging, and truly ones that you can root for. The early story is unfortunately somewhat awkward with its plot and writing, but the author has improved over time and it's wonderful to see. Thank you for entering galacticath, and we hope this feedback helps!
Defying Gravity (63/100):
Defying Gravity is a work full of interesting characters and clever ideas. What unfortunately bogged down the story was the somewhat awkward writing and pacing. If the author works to improve her writing style and pacing, then the work could be a real showstopper. Thank you for entering, starlight_splash, and we hope this feedback helps!
Reverse Falls: Welcome to the Show (82.5/100):
Reverse Falls: Welcome to the Show is definitely one of the more well-executed versions of the Reverse Falls AU that are out there. The new plot that the author has created is intriguing and its characters are well executed. The pacing could be improved upon, but the writing is well-crafted and deserves its honorable mention.
Gravity Rises (93/100):
Gravity Rises truly sets the bar for role swap fanfictions, as well as the fanfiction genre as a whole. The author, Wings, takes the regular plot of Gravity Falls and gives it a new and exciting spin that will make even the toughest of critics anticipate the next chapters. If she could improve on anything, it would be to add a little bit more description in her writing to help more vividly depict the wonderful world that she writes in. However, that doesn't discredit her phenomenal plot and characters that make her beyond deserve this victory.
Congratulations to our winners! You will both receive a cover for your entry and a follow from our account, and your works will be added to public reading lists to promote them. The 1st place winner will also receive an awesome sticker for their cover. Thank you for entering the Gravity Falls Wattys!
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