Forty
I am so so sorry for leaving Thai fic in the dark since the end of February. I've just been so so busy, I've had my GCSE's (very important exams) and I've been finishing off other fics while I've been at it. But it's summer and I've made it my goal to finish certain fanfics and this is one of them!
So I'm sorry again, and I hope that this chapter will make up for my lack of updates and attention to his fic and hopefully you'll enjoy what is left of this fic to come!
Also! Incredible amount of thanks for getting me over 400K views and over 17.5K votes! That's fucking amazing and if this ever reaches 1M views I swear I think I'd cry 😂 but I think that'd be a good time from now but there's always wishful thinking!
On the bright side, met Jamie Dornan today. Mr. Grey himself.
Enjoy some fetus Louis and Liam to hurt your heart (:
It's been far too long since Louis was last punishment, nevermind scowled at by Liam. Maybe that was because things were still incredibly tender between the pair, Liam not wanting to do anything that could jeopardise the relationship that they've built up after blow after blow and Louis not being so much of a brat after all. Of course, there comes to times like these that Louis does act out, in public, and Liam has to do something about it.
They can't live in the dark for long. Liam has just as much as an inch under his skin to control Louis as Louis has to be controlled, no matter how much that the pretty submissive wants to try and deny that fact. He craves it, it's attention and everyone knows just how much that Louis loves attention, especially when it's coming from the right person.
His little act in the club was a telltale sign of want and greed and Liam has made it his mission to have it punished out of Louis. It's been far too long since they've scened, and maybe that's because Louis has been all too sensitive but he's been pushing for far too long and he's pushed Liam over the edge with his little sneering in the club; now it's time for a well needed punishment.
"Up those stairs, strip and kneel."Liam orders, not even looking at Louis as he looks down at his phone, in the middle of informing Harry of their whereabouts and making sure that they won't be home early. From what he can tell, Harry and Zayn will be out late, which means that they don't have to limit things to the bedroom if needed.
"But-"
"Did it sound like I was negotiating?"Liam's voice suddenly turns extremely cold, giving Louis a look that leaves no room for anymore arguments and shows that he is not messing around. The submissive immediately curls into himself at Liam's harsh stare, shoulders slumping back and head lowering in a submissive manner.
"No, sir."He murmurs, keeping his stare at his bare thighs.
"When I come up those stairs you better be naked and you better be kneeling."Liam doesn't spare Louis a second glance, waiting until the soft mumble of yes sir and the the car door closing before he makes any movement to get out the car himself. Liam pays his driver a pretty big tip for having to deal with Louis and him before he gets out of the car, purposely taking his time.
Liam sighs as he spots the trail of clothing from the front hall way all the way up the stairs, a show thrown to the floor, his see through top draped over the stair banisters and a sock or two left on the stairs. On his way up, Liam is grabbing each item of clothing, all of them smelling so strongly of Louis' favourite perfume that doesn't fail to make Liam's heart skip a beat in his chest.
Upon opening the bedroom door, Liam is spotted with the sight of Louis' naked body, kneeling in his place upon the kneeling pillow that Liam has had placed on the floor of his side of the bed for moments like this. His body is straight, palms pressed to the floor and head bowed down in the submissive stance, body not even flinching whenever Liam slams the bedroom door shut.
"I want you to do 2 things."He announces, dumping Louis' discarding clothing into the wash basket and making a move to take off his blazer."First, I want you to strip the bed and then I want you to pick out a cock ring and something I can spank you with that you think is suitable enough on your level of punishment. If you come back with something I don't deem suitable enough, you'll get 10 extra spanks."
In amusement, the dominant is watching how Louis scrambles to get the ordered obeyed, stripping the bed from the thick silk sheets and throwing them off to the side before disappearing into the closet for the 2 items. All while this is happening, Liam is stripping himself of his own clothes, a layer at a time until he stands in only his shirt and trousers, a couple of buttons undone of his shirt.
"Wher-"
"On the bed. Don't speak unless I tell you that you can."Liam cuts him off and Liam knows how much that it kills Louis inside that he's being ordered only to talk whenever he's being spoken to or told that he can. The submissive looks like that he wants to open his mouth and protest but Liam beats him to it."Every word that you speak out of term equals another spank. Don't test me, Louis Tomlinson."
Without a further word, Louis' mouth is snapping shut as he does as he's ordered and sets the items onto the bed for Liam to take a look at it. He's chosen a simple black cock ring as instructed and a long wooden paddle. It's a newer one, in a soft light brown wood with the worse Attitude Adjuster carved onto one side, ideal for imprinting a bruise on a submissive's bottom.
"A little harsher than I intended, but it'll do."Liam purposely smirks, rolling up the sleeves of his shirt. Just as Louis turns to give him a glare, the Dominant is grabbing the sub by the chin and forcefully pulling their lips together to meet in an extremely messy as heated kiss that makes the blood rush to Louis' cock immediately.
With a soft little moan, Louis is desperately trying to catch up after Liam's fast paced lips, fingers falling to grab onto the material of Liam's shirt, dragging himself closer to the Doms body as his mouth falls slack with Liam's exploring tongue. The kiss is broken just as Louis is starting to get into it, cursing himself for being half hard at just a make out session.
"That makes this part a lot easier."The Dominants lips rise with a smirk, a large hand patting on Louis' bum as his other hand holds the black cock ring that Louis had chosen. With skill and ease, Liam is slipping the cock ring into Louis' cock, purposely pressing a kiss to the sensitive tip of the cock which makes the submissive squirm and whine."On the bed. All fours. Ass out."
Louis is quick with obeying the orders, scrambling to get up onto all fours on the mattress of the stripped bed, his ass out and ready for his punishment just like Liam wants him to be. It's a nightmare not being allowed to talk freely, but then again, it's a punishment.
"You're getting 50 spanks with this paddle and for the following week, you're limited to 100 words per day due to the way that you spoke to me in public this evening. If you speak over 100 words, more will be added onto your punishment. If you follow the rules and meet 100 or under words per day, you will be rewarded. Is that understood?"
"Yes, Daddy."Louis nods his head, shutting his eyes whenever he feels Liam's large same hands rub over his ass cheeks in a way that's a telltale sign that Liam is lining up and about to start.
"Do you remember your safe word?"
"Yes, Daddy."
Without a further warning, Liam is landing the paddle down to Louis' right ass cheek, leaving behind a light pink shade in its place. The action alone has Louis letting out a surprised little oof before recovering with a shaky sigh.
It doesn't take long for Louis' ass to turn a dark shade of pink, the submissive slumped down with his face pressed into a pillow that Liam allowed him to have, his ass sticking out even more so which is perfect for the Dom. As much as Louis' ass is pulsing in pain, his cock is an aching red and hard, dripping pre-cum onto the mattress as he moans and sobs into the pillow, knuckles white as he tries to grab onto the thin sheet covering the mattress.
"20 more, baby doll."Liam presses a couple of soft kisses to the dimples at the bottom of Louis' spine, mumbling against the hot, sweaty skin."You're doing so well. Being very good for, Daddy. Obeying all of his orders and commands just like a good little sub."
Liam is brining the paddle down again in the exact same place on Louis' right ass check until he skin is a pulsing red and almost bruising, leaving behind an unmarked section that reads Attitude Adjuster perfectly for Liam to see. It's going to be perfect for Liam to show around for the next week or so.
"5 more."He informs
"Daddy, daddy please."Louis is sobbing out in both pain and pleasure, his body dangerously shaking and thighs quivering as he tries to keep his lower body up so that Liam can spank him with the paddle. The least he wants is more spanks for his laziness.
"Please what?"
"Please let me cüm."He sobs, desperately needing a release, years running down his cheeks and knees nearly buckling. His cock is now a purple with desperation, bum a slowly bruising colour that Liam is almost proud of.
"If I take off your cock ring, you can only cum when I say that you can. Understand?"Once the submissive is giving a desperate nod, Liam is reaching round and easily slipping off the cöck ring, keeping a firm hold around the base of Louis' côck, smirking against the skin of his back."5 more and then you can come."
The submissive's small curvy body is jerking forward unexpectedly with the neck spank of the paddle, letting out a painful sound at from both his ass and his cock which twitches in Liam's hold because fuck, he's turned on so much. The second and third spank is making Louis moan and try and rut against Liam's hand, something that makes Liam nip at the sensitive bruising flesh of Louis' bum and cashing the sub to squawk.
"Ow!"
"Do that again and we'll start over."He threatens before landing the last two spanks with the paddle to Louis' bum, dropping the paddle to the floor just as he lets go of Louis' shaft and lets the submissive cüm.
It all happens so quickly because one minute Louis is sobbing from pleasure and pain and the neck, the submissive is coming white onto the mattress with a loud, high pitched moan before he's collapsing stomach first onto the mattress out of fatigue. Body over stimulated and mind over worked, Louis is whipped out, body numb and head flying.
Liam is quick, sitting on the bed, fingers carding through Louis' sweaty hazel hair as he whispers do the over stimulated submissive beside him, his free hand rubbing soothing circles into the sobbing younger mans back, head deep inside subspace.
"You did so well, princess. Amazingly well. I'm so proud of you for sticking through with it and for taking your punishment without complaint or mishap."Liam praises gently, his hands gentle and soothing as he continues to use his hands to relax Louis in different ways.
"Tired...M'so tired."Louis mumbles, head turned to the side, eyes half hooded and cloudy with a familiar subspace look in his eyes that Liam knows all too well now. It's not the first time and it won't be the last time and Liam is an expect by now.
"I know, Louis. Lets get you a bath first and some food and then we can sleep, yeah? The rest of your punishment can continue tomorrow."
"I love you,"Louis can feel the tears that continue to run down is cheeks, not stopping as he blinks up to look at Liam. Liam. So handsome and so full of beauty and Louis wants to tell him that, tell him just how much that he means to him, tell him how much beauty that Liam holds, even if he doesn't think it himself, because Louis knows that he's not the only self conscious one in this relationship.
But he can't, his head is too puzzled and foggy and his body too sluggish in actions to do anything other than just stare, stare at this beautiful, handsome and amazing man that deals with all of Louis' shit even on the worse of days for the both of them. And god, he loves him so much.
"And I love you too, princess."
And he does, he truly fucking does.
Alas! I have not died and I am indeed alive!
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