I apologize for having SUCH serious chapters but im SO tired and kind of sick im just not hyper. Normally when i wrote i was hyper or extremely inspired by the most craziest things. But this story needs serious moments 2. I mean i dont think its that serious but it isnt really crazy and random but i need to develope characters before we start the rain of OC's and Shippuden. (which im almost on :)

plus im making the shippuden trailor already. Check my tumblr l8r for sneak peaks and crap but nothing will be up but updates for the next 10 days cuz im on vacation in another state.

Plus i know gangsters arent like this but apparently in the naruto world and Raids' world they are because c'mon, their SO much more fun this way!

And check out the song ;) " got my hair did and my shit braided up" made me think of you KJStarLace haha!

Edit: Sry forgot about the pic on the side, its of him in shippuden but we're so close to shippuden that im just going to post it. And I think tht scene will happen with that pose so just look at it! :)

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Raid's POV (yes, already,) 

I smirked as I walked away from the girl. She was pretty hot. But that isnt my focus. My focus is finding valuable teammates, even one if thats all i can get, that I can trust.  I used my madari-gan to teleporte to my city. I walked in smirking as i looked at the abandoned streets. Now this wasnt even a normal village, or a village at all. It was your basic average time ghetto city. Think the movie 8 mile with Eminem. Yup.

I walked into the tiny shack of a warehouse that opened into an elegant living area in the back. I hidden mansion. I cocked the gun I was holding and walked. 

" Hey Raid Bro watsup? What're you doing here? Your gonna get caught if you come back here." I rolled my eyes at my  idiotic brother. Why was he only one year younger than me?

" Raid? What the heck are you doing here!? I thought you left." Here comes the waterworks. Naomi. My younger sister, the twin of Kenshin, the idotic little brother.

"Ya I did, I just need something. Now if you would move before they find me here." Naomi growled.

"You act like they're evil!" I glared back at her.

"Its because they are."  I jumped up to my room on the second floor and grabbed my bags and gear, its either we leave or fight today. I chose Hero because I had heard of a girl coming back from her captures at a young age. She did something heroic, or inspiring, either way she did something that no one else in Konoha could possibly do at the age she was. Maybe Itachi Uchiha, but he was a ninja. I've heard alot about Hero from my parents. I know all of her basic information, pretty much everything she told me tonight. But I just needed to make sure she was the right girl, and I also need to make sure she doesnt figure anything about my past, because the second that happens, she's going to investigate.

" Your a monster!' Naomi shrieked from my doorway. I glared at her with much more intesity than my normal glares. She backs away slightly. I turn my head towards the edge of the hallway, which had no railing, and jump off and land safely onto the first floor.

She followes but used the stairs instead.

" I am a monster, but im stronger than you'll ever be." I was supposed to be the heir but having the Madari-gan changed that and now my family is trying to kill me. Which is why im trying to get the hell out of here. Im the only one of the available heir's that has ninja training. You see only the leader of the Takao gang can be trained in the ninja arts. Which is why im being hunted and not to mention no one in the family has possesed the Madari-gan for a thousand years.

But im better off without them. The Akatsuki, or at least Orochimaru, would be stronger than the Takao.  Hell, probably me and Hero with some training would be stronger.Plus I heard she has a sister. 

I walked out of the mansion and out of the fake abandoned buidling. I heard guns fire and I rolled my eyes. I ran to the edge of the city and continued on. Im in no rush. I have 'till tomorrow.

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As i walked through Konoha girls stared at me and gave me their numbers. What sluts. These girls are the kind that guys like me use as tools. I smirked as I walked through. I heard whispers of sasuke and me.

Apparently I look like the last uchiha. Nice. Just what i wanted to hear. *high sarcasm alert*

I gave a crooked grin as I saw her standing there alone holding her books in her uniform. Girls that were by her gasped.

" Is he walking towards her?!."

"Lets hope he hates her."

" Maybe he wants to tease her!" The girls paniced as I walked towards her. They really must not like her.

" Not him too! First Ryu then this hot guy!" I walked up to her and smirked. My green eyes shining in amusement, but not glowing since my madari-gan was of no use here.

" Um? Do I know you?" She asked pulled her shorts down I tiny bit. I noticed she was wearing a black tie instead of the bows like the girls, and black shorts instead of a miniskirt. Her short cut sleeves button up was the same as the boys and the girls though. I tucked my hands in the pockets of my black skinny jeans. My black jacket leaned forward with me.

" You should. Are you going to put up a fight, or are you going to come with." Her eyes widened then turned into a glare.

" Raid." She glared at me and I saw her cover one arm with the other. I smirked.

"Dont be scared, its not like im going to kill you."

"Your early." I nodded and stood up straight. " Are we doing this here?" I looked over at her from my shoulder while walking away.

" No, lets leave the village. These girls dont need to be jealous of what we're about to do."I smirked and the girls gasped and scoffed. Shouting out names that shouldn't  be even written let alone said.

" Would you girls stop insulting yourselves?! Really have some self confidence." I shouted at them and walked out of the gates nonchalantly while Hero just stared.

"You coming?" She nodded and caught up with me. We walked in silence and I couldnt help but notice the way she walked. Lots of confidence, but from it you could tell she went through emotional and physical pain to get there.

"So, Hero, are you going to fight, or do you want to come peacefully." 

" I made a promise to a friend that I would never leave." I smirked at what I was about to do. I took the siringe in my pocket and grabbed her arm. Her eyes widened as the needle went into her but they relaxed as the liquid went in. I growled, she should be out cold. I took the 2 extra needles and put those drugs in her too. She didnt even struggle! As she fell to the ground I caught her and started walking off. Today starts the beginning of my life as an S-rank rogue ninja. And tomorrow as the first day of training.

 picture of Raid on my InsaneWolfGirl tumblr blog (you can find it in chapter 18's external link or on my profile. Hope you think he's creepy :)