Title of the book: Magic and Love

Written by: Pinkie567

Book Genre: Fantasy and romance.

Book Cover: The cover looks very good and makes me want to check the story once. I would like to say that i like the fact that the cover matchs the story and looks very intresting. Even when we all say don't judge a book by its cover. We still judge it no matter what, as writers we need to keep in mind to make the cover look intresting and also have it related to the story.

My Opinion: The story was very nice, i loved the first few chapters. Most of the chapters were very long and took me a while to finnish the chapters. The story is reguarly updated which is very nice. I'm sure others who are reading this story will also be enjoying it! The writer puts full detail in the story and makes us understand clearly what is going on. The first few chapters were amazing then in between i got kind of distracted in reading the story. But later on the chapters got better and i kept reading. Keep remembering to making sure on reading over your chapters a couple of times and if you are losing intrest in reading your own story make sure to fix that because these things mostly make readers stop reading the story.

Things I love about this book: That it has long chapters, the blurb is very intresting and makes the reader want to click on reading it. There are not many spelling mistakes or grammar mistakes. The cover looks very good and i like the fact it matchs the story. The main thing i want to see in books is them getting updated reguarly. So once i checked wattpad and it had lots of notifications. Most of the notifications were from this story getting updated. I liked the fact you updated the story and published a couple of chapters together. I'm going to remember that and later in the future also use it for one of my stories.

Things I think that can be improved: Mainly the small grammar and spelling mistakes there are. Also i wanted to point out one thing i think you should reread over your story a couple of time and see if you like the chapter and that your intrested in reading it. Because if the writer is not interested in reading their own story, it is very hard making the readers be interested in reading the story.

Extra Feedback: Just remember to read over your own story so that it makes sense and you know if you're interested in the story. But I did love reading this story and I loved the fact that this book has long chapters and gets updated regularly. I'm not sure if this is going to work but i will try linking it so that others find it easy to find the book.

Star Ratings: ⭐️⭐️⭐️ Three stars out of Five Stars

Why I gave this story three stars:

1.The story has long chapters
2.Quick updates
3.First few chapters were very interesting
4.Good and interesting cover
5.Good and very detailed blurb
6.The chapters are detailed
7.The writer makes it clearly understandable about what is happening

It was very fun reading your story and enjoy the rest of your writing journey. I wish you all the best!