Guess what??

I've tried hard to reduce the number of lines..

And I have succeeded in doing so by 4 lines.. 4 lines.. OMG...

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I'm sitting under a tree,

Thinking about my past!!

What is happening to me??

Will my guilt ever last??

All the things I have done,

To those around me..

Won't my actions become undone?

So that I'll be free!..

I know I am very rude.

I keep hurting everyone.

So tell me, dude!

Isn't this fun??

When they hurt you,

You act as if you are glad!!

And they are hurt by you,

They tell, you're bad...

I am very happy that,

I have you guys to tell

Everything, so that you can give me a pat,

And tell me to continue my journey to hell!!

These are the feelings I feel;

When I am really heart-broken.

And have nothing to deal

With, when I feel like I have to run..

Run, run, run a long, long way

Where I feel like I'm a new-born.

And I don't have to pay,

For the foods I eat all day long...

Will I be able to ask for forgiveness,

From the people whom I've hurt?

Will I be able to handle everyone with kindness,

And keep my home free of dirt!!

It doesn't matter,

If I fulfill the first one..

But about the latter (keeping house dirt-free),

I know it's very hard to get it done!! :P

I know my poems are very very very long,

What about the ones that are to come..

Probably, it's hard to put into a song,

And very very, very very hard to just hum.......

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