LeopardSplash: Rating
This is @LeopardSplash 's OC, please don't steal!
Name: LeopardSplash
Gender: She-cat
Clan: FireClan, a clan that lives on a moor next to NightClan and SunClan. They have a camp surrounded by gorse and have dens underground. Some cats in there clan a born with the power of fire which to activate it they flick there tails to light the tip of there tail. All clans have a seperate power and are not allowed to use it in battle because it would be unfair.
Appearance: Sleek, well musculed light grey she-cat with lilac spots and bright green eyes ( She does not have the power of fire ).
Role: Warrior
Age: 23 moons old
Family: Her perents are RedFur and TalonScar. She has a sister called TinyDash and a brother called FlakeKit who died when she was four moons old. She has a mate called CobraFrost and has a kit called AlgeaPelt and an adopted kit called FrostedHeart.
Attitude: LeopardSplash is a cheerful and friendly cat who can be a bit anoying at times but normally likes to help the clan out in anyway possible. After her brother died she swore she would protect all Kits with her life at all costs. She is also quirky.
Likes: CobraFrost ( no matter what ), kits and just in general her clan.
Dislikes: Battles ( Especially ones for no reason ), being left out.
Rating:
Names- 9/10. The name Leopardsplash sounds super cool! FireClan, NightClan and SunClan are cool names also. Redfur sounds soothing to me for some reason. Talonscar... spoopy. Tinydash; THIS NAME IS AWESOME 11/10. Flakekit- cool name, RIP. Cobrafrost- I'm not sure if Cobra is actually used as a suffix, but it still sounds cool either way! Algeapelt and Frostedheart are creative names!
Appearance- 7/10. I think the spots should be black or brown instead of lilac, because that seems to mystical. And I would suggest her having a yellow-ish or orange-ish pelt, instead of light gray, to fit her name.
Personality- 10/10! I think it's nice how she is cheerful and friendly at times, but can also be annoying. I like how she swore to protect all kits after her brother died; that's also a great backstory!
Great job with this OC!
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