This is @yilinrao 's OC, please don't steal!
Name: Emberglow
Gender: She-cat
Clan: ThunderClan
Role: Deputy
Age: 16 moons
Appearance: Sleek, well musculed Ginger she-cat with torquise eyes
Family:\|/-Father- Pepper (Ginger tabby tom with hazel eyes) [kittypet]-Mother- Angel (Cream she-cat with blue eyes) [kittypet]-littermates- Pumpkin (Ginger tabby tom with hazel eyes) Carrot (Ginger tabby tom with blue eyes) [kittypets]-little siblings- Dewkit (Cream tom with hazel eyes) Autumn (light brown and tan with blue eyes) [kittypet]
Attitude: Kind, Gentle, Brave, Selfless, Stubborn
Likes: Spending time with her little brother that she took in, hunting with Cloudfoot
Dislikes: Insects, unessecery battles

Rating:
Names- 9 and three quarters/10. Okay, Emberglow. I love this name! One thing I am unsure about- I don't think glow is technically a suffix. If you want, keep it! If you're going to use it in a story, I suggest changing it to 'Embershine' or 'Emberspark' :D. Pepper- I think this name is creative! Angel- the first thing I thought of was a cream she-cat with blue eyes. And I looked and that was actually what she was!!! I love this name! Pumpkin and Carrot are so cute, especially together <3 and Autumn- I think this is funny, because warriors call autumn leaf-fall! So if warriors met him, they'd be pretty confused XD. Lastly, Dewkit! I immediately feel some love towards this little guy, because he's the only one who decided to not become a kittypet(other than Emberglow). 

Appearence- 10/10!! I think having turquoise eyes is creative! I like how she is sleek and well muscled. I also like how you kept everyone in the family's appearance close! A lot of people don't do this.

Attitude- 10/10 again! It's nice how there's good and bad traits. Most people spoil their OC's and their ONLY kind and the best cats in the clan or whatever. 

Other stuff- 3/10. 16 moons is to young to be deputy, because she'd have to mentor an apprentice. That normally takes 6 moons. So by the times she's a warrior, she'd be 12 moons. Sorry- it just doesn't add up. Either make her older or just make her a warrior with an apprentice for now.

Overall, great job! I love this OC!!!