Makes pov: after I disapare from mikans sight I start to wonder to myself "I wonder if she will be ok" I whisper out loud to myself "I would worry about yourself" I hear a vocie say behind me suddenly the air gets colder I turn around to meet with blood red eye "oh no!!" I say eyes wide stepping back he takes a step foreword "s-soul" I whisper out in shock "the one and only" he says with a smirk "a-why a-Re you h-h-ere" I stutter out "oh just to bring you back with me" he says reveling his sharpteeth I start to make a run back to the cafè it's still close by I make it to the door when I hear mikan it sounds like she's in troble I try to open the door sh!t it's locked I TRY to run for it agian but as I'm half way to the back door someone grabs my wrist and swings me around agian "now don't be like that Maka" soul says stroking my cheek he lifted my chin to meet his eyes "don't look in his eyes don't look in his eyes " I keep saying to myself I try to close my eyes but I can't it's to late I'm Already hipnatised you see souls really a vampire suddenly I feel really sleepy and I drifted off to sleep......
Souls pov:
I look down at Maka finally I walk in the back door carrying Maka bridle style I look across the room to see natsume "hey bro" I yell across the room he turns around putting away a nedle "dude you could of just hypnotised her" I say with a questioning look "ya but that wouldn't be fun now would it" he says with a smirk "fair enought so was she hard to catch I heard a gun shot" I say "well ya I mean she kicked one of my soldiers in the stomic jumped and bullet and shot that busted. Street lamp" natsume says pointing to the window "what about u "he asked "oh to easy" I say back "lucky" he say pouting "well we better get back"I say " ya we don't want thim escaping agian" he says with a smirck

.........To be Continued.............