Okay...
So I've recently looked over this story, which I wrote a long time ago. And it's not very good in terms of plot holes, grammar and vocabulary. So, I'm thinking of two possibilities.

I need you guys to give me comments carefully.

Do you want a...

SEQUEL?
Please comment on the right.

Why? Give any ideas you have, I will not steal them, and constructive criticism is welcome.

or an

OFFICIAL VERSION?
Please comment on the right.

Why? Give your suggestions for any improvements, I am open to criticism. 

My opinion:
I'm not really sure so I'm asking you guys, the people who read my very amateur story. Personally, I think that a sequel would be quite interesting, and I might do an official version another day.

Whatever suggestions you guys have, please Wattpad Message me, comment below, or type on my message board.

Thank you all for your votes, reads and comments!!! Love you guys!!!

COMMENTS SECTION:
Feel free to put any other comments below, it's a free-for-all anything.

Thanks again for all you wonderful people!!!