Felix the Fancy Feline
Hello, and it's Nat back at it again with another OC submitted by @Peanut_Cat123! Thank you for submitting and I hope you enjoy this chapter.
Name: Felix the Fancy Feline
That sounds like a nice name, I looked at the ref sheet, and it fits him. He's quite... dapper. The only thing is, like some people mentioned on my OC Generator, the name Felix is common... too common.
Animal/creature: Tuxedo cat
For a fancy feline, Tuxedo cats literally are wearing natural tuxedos, so makes sense. Also this is one of the few OCs that mention what breed of their species. One other OC I rated, Greta, was an Anglo-Nubian goat, Pommy was a pomeranian, and Felix is a Tuxedo cat. Sweet.
Material: Metal, sort of cloth like
So like the original guys or something else? Is the metal the endoskeleton or is his suit metal and cloth? Otherwise sounds fine to me.
Accessories/Appearance: You see, @Peanut_Cat123 sent a link, but Wattpad hates me and won't let me put in the picture or the link. So to see the picture, please go to the Rules and Forms chapter and check it out yourself.
So in general I like this guy. He, a tuxedo cat, is wearing a tuxedo cat. I like the color scheme. Blue goes well with black and white, so that's adorable. Keeping stuff one shade of blue seems slightly boring, but at least he's easier to draw if anything. The arms on his back though... I'm glad he has that compartment for them. If I was a kid I would be quite scared of him, not gonna lie. But I can see how he can use them as a waiter. In the backstory, however, you say his legs got taken away, and he doesn't have legs in the picture. Is this after his legs got taken away, or was there a small mistake? Overall, his appearance is quite unique and nice.
Gender of Animatronic: Male
Nothing against it.
Gender of Possessing ghost: Male
You do you.
Name of Possessing Ghost: Ethan Marly Grander
That is actually a very nice name, I cannot think of original names if my life depended on it. His last name makes me think of Hermione Granger.
Preffered Gender: Male
Kind of makes sense... Just ignore this, I'm awkward to the moon and back.
Sexuality: Polysexual
Nice.
Preferred Pronouns: He/him
Personally thought so.
Age of Animatronic: 33
That's... old. Like old old. Makes sense as a non-used animatronic, but in my opinion a bit too much.
Age of Possessing Ghost: 5
That is quite a big difference.
Personality: He is happy and joyful, well he acts like it around kids. Some say Felix is the: 'kids whisperer'.
Woah, so he can lure kids easily... I like this personality, maybe add a couple more details.
Strengths: He is able to lure kids in easily.
Being a 'kids whisperer' gives you that ability, is this why he likes killing? Why can he lure kids in easily?
Weakness: Getting too violent
Then what? He gets found out about? Why is this his weakness? I would appreciate a bit more detail on this.
Likes: His friends, killing
I thought his weakness was getting too violent, but he likes killing... Aight.
Dislikes: Getting ignored
Quite common, in my opinion. But who likes being ignored?
Date of Creation: 1983
Okay, can't say anything.
Company: Tootoo's robotics (the robot turtle who replaced Felix)
I thought it was Too Too? But okay, seems fine.
System: Tootoo's Animatronics
Seems good.
Cause of death: Felix stuffed Ethan in him like Circus Baby did with Elizabeth
Wait... Does Felix have a- oh wait I forgot about the arms on his back. Seems good to me.
Status: He is in the Staff's room, forgotten
Poor dude, except this feels slightly cliche. There's a lot of OCs that were thrown away for various reasons, and then get possessed and roam their location and kill a bunch of people. I don't hate the idea, only that it's overused.
Performs at: Tootoo's Diner (formerly felix's diner)
Thought so.
Bandmates: N/A, doesn't perform
Like the status issue, this is a tiny bit overused. Yes, I have an OC that doesn't perform so why am I ranting? To help make OC's original.
Relationship With Bandmates: He has friends called Finn The Fish and Tessa Tiger.
Yes! It's Finn and Tessa! I can't say anything about having friends, we all love companions. I guess to see their description you could go to my OC Generator, because @Peanut_Cat123 added them there.
Purpose: Waiter
I saw his design, I would think of him as a bartender, with his mechanical hands serving multiple drinks at once. Of course, this isn't a bar but a diner, but this way he could carry multiple plates at once, so I like this. It's sort of common, but I personally like it.
Fun fact(s): Felix has spider-like arm things. Felix's favorite thing is kids.
I already knew about the arms, which is by itself very original, but his favorite thing is kids. Why does he kill kids then? Are kids his favorite thing to kill? I'd like some more info on the kids, but the other stuff is great.
Possessed Ghost's Backstory: Ethan was 5 when he came to Felix's Fancy Diner, and it was then called Mitten's Diner because FElix was already in the Staff room. He went with his parents, but soon snuck off and opened the door to the staff room, finding Felix. Ethan felt sort of bad for Felix, and her turned him on and played with him. That's when felix grabbed him in.
So I like this backstory. Him sneaking off is normal for his age, so there's that. He found Felix, and I guess naturally he was a friendly lad, so he was being kind. But how exactly did he figure out Felix's controls? Was there a manual? Please explain a bit. So Ethan began playing with good ol' Felix. Now my sister would probably not do this, and she just turned 6. Anyways, so Felix grabbed him and BOOM! Possession. This is slightly bland, and I would appreciate a bit more detail or just a bit more story, otherwise this will do.
Backstory: Felix was made for performing and being a waiter, and him and his friends were called 'Felix and The Bunch'. Felix soon started to glitch, and they shut him down. He got replaced with a cat named Mittens, and soon Felix had to get his legs ripped off for another animatronic. Felix got angry and burned Mittens, but they the added Too Too the Turtle. Felix was soon forgotten, well until Ethan came.
So technically Felix performed and was a waiter? Minimum wage, huh. So the name 'Felix and The Bunch' is really cute, you should've added the trademark thingy. ANYWAY! So poor Felixio started to glitch, which is slightly common, but not so common so I like it. He's the first OC I remember seeing who got used to make other animatronics, so take that. What did Mittens do to him to deserve being burnt to a crisp? It wasn't her fault, but I agree, I would wanna get rid of my replacement. But the company retaliated, creating Too Too. Poor Felix, he really wasn't wanted. You said 'well until Ethan came'. What does that mean? What happened after? I honestly think the topic of forgotten until I get possessed is pretty common, but I overall like Felix.
I'm sorry this came out late, but I was being busy and lazy so it took me a while for me to finish. I like Felix, his backstory is short but easy to follow along with and gives enough detail, and I love his apperance.
TOTAL RATING: 9/10
Thank you for sumbitting your OC, @Peanut_Cat123,and I hope you enjoyed this chapter!
Nat out.
Oh by the way, if you're too lazy to check out the link, I put it in the comments
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