Here's the second part of the alternate version of the movie that I mentioned before!

This part of the plot points concerns the animatronics' restlessness, and Mike's discovery of their living state!

I hope that you like it! 😁👍

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Night 2:

- On his first official shift, Mike sits in the guard's office ... and starts flicking through the cameras.

- He suddenly frowns and pauses on the camera aimed at Pirates' Cove.

- The 'Sorry, Out of Order' sign had suddenly changed to one that reads: 'IT'S ME!'

- Mike cautiously goes to investigate the sign, and then sees that Foxy's head is oddly turned to the right?

- Mike looks rightward ... and sees the same words being repeated in scrawled, wobbly patterns across the nearest wall!

- The patterns run in the direction of a corridor, and go down it ... to Parts and Services!

- Mike cautiously follows the line there, picking up a chair for defence on the way!

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- Once there, Mike warily approaches a cupboard ... which has bumping noises coming from it!

- He opens the cupboard, only to find it empty ... apart from the words "IT'S ME!" inside.

- Behind Mike however, a sharp, metal hook gleams ominously ... as Foxy sneaks up on him!

- Just as Foxy raises his hook up ... both he and Mike are suddenly distracted by Mike's phone going off!

- Mike flinches, then sighs, puts the chair down, and turns around ... causing Foxy to hide outside the room.

- Mike answers the phone ... to find out that it's Max calling; asking if he could come home early?

- Max explains that a certain 'appointment' suddenly changed to an early time, causing her to cut the babysitting short?

- Mike is not at all happy about his work shift being interrupted, but accepts Max's apology ... and leaves the place.

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- (Max, as it turns out; is lying!)

- (She's only just found out that Julo and his friends are planning to vandalise and loot the pizzeria that night!)

- (Max endeavoured to try and send Mike away, so that he didn't get hurt!)

- (She, though, was planning to follow the vandals to try and stop them!)

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- Just after Mike leaves, the vandals arrive at the pizzeria ... and start to smash the place up!

- Max arrives too, and tries to stop the looting and damage ... only to be scorned and ignored!

- As in the original version, the vandals are all hunted down by the animatronics ... and killed one by one!

- Max sadly dies too, due to the animatronics' ignorance of her harmless intentions.

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Day 3:

- Max's disappearance and inability to be contacted worries Mike ... who suspects that Julo may be responsible.

- Mike then reluctantly tells Abby that she'll have to come along with him on his work shift tonight.

- He states that this is because he can't find Max ... and that there's not enough time to hire someone else to come!

- Abby, on the other hand; is super excited at the thought of going to a new, fun place ... which she can explore!

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Night 3:

- Mike arrives with Abby to the pizzeria ... and is immediately distressed at the vandalism!

- Mike then tells Abby to stay in the office while he cleans up the mess, and she reluctantly agrees.

- The animatronics' eyes slowly narrow as their gazes all follow Mike as he starts cleaning.

- Once done, Mike retreats to the office ... where he finds Abby playing with things that she found in a cupboard.

- Mike gently reprimands her about touching other people's things ... and puts them back in the cupboard.

- Two things, however, catch Mike's gaze ... and he pauses for a moment to look at them.

- The first one is a framed photograph of the two mascots of Fredbear's Diner ... both waving at the camera.

- The second is another framed photograph ... but this time: of two men standing in front of a brand-new Freddy Fazbear's Pizzeria!

- The man on the left wears casual clothes, with a rustic theme to them.

- The man on the right, in contrast; wears a formal and smart business suit ... in bright purple!

- Both men wear golden badges on their lapels ... both of animals: a golden bear, and a golden bunny.

- Mike frowns in thought for a moment, then shrugs, and puts the photos away.

- He repeats his "stay here" instruction to Abby, sits down in his chair ... and incidentally nods off!

- When Mike does, Abby quietly sneaks out to explore the rest of the pizzeria.

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- (Mike has another dream flashback: this time of a dimly-lit study ...)

- (A young Mike, holding a fox plushie in his hands ... tiptoes towards the desk at the back.)

- (The vague figure of a tall man sits at said desk, with his back to Mike.)

- (Mike begs the figure ... revealed to be his dad ... for comfort; only to be coldly rejected.)

- (Mike's dad tells him to 'man up' ... tough little bunnies never snivel like that!)

- (As his dad speaks, he turns to face Mike ... with a still-blurred face.)

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- Mike wakes with a start, and then discovers Abby's disappearance!

- He then hears his little sister scream, and sees the animatronics crowding around Abby on the cameras!

- As in the movie, Mike rushes to find Abby being tickled with the animatronics in the main area!

- The possessed robots find Mike's disbelief amusing ... something which is lost on the innocent Abby.

- Mike then hears a noise behind him, turns ... and gasps in horror as he sees Golden Freddy glaring at him!

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- (Cassidy is perpetually hostile towards all adults, especially Mike!)

- (It's doubly-scary for Mike, since Golden Freddy is the same animatronic that killed his brother?)

- (Mike has quite severe PTSD from the incident?)

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- Mike has a brief flashback of Garrett's death here!

- Cassidy smirks a little at Mike's fear, as the young man stumbles back from the golden bear!

- Abby, not quite understanding ... asks Mike what's wrong ... it's just Cassidy?

- An excited Abby says that Cassidy is a ghost bear, and asks "isn't that cool?"

- Mike isn't so excited, and more than a little traumatised by all of the things he's just seen!

- He persuades Abby to that it's time for them both to go home ... much to Abby and the robot's sadness.

- Abby promises Freddy and his friends that she'll be back, and gives them a nice drawing.

- Freddy, Bonnie, Chica, and Foxy all wave at Abby as she leaves ... and she waves back at them!

- Cassidy, however ... scowls deeply at Mike, a growl emanating from deep within!

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- (The reason why Cassidy hates Mike so much ... is because of Garrett's death!)

- (He discovered from Garett's mind the details and cause of death ... provoking Cassidy to swear to kill Mike on sight!

- (The only reason why Cassidy hasn't so far ... is because he doesn't want to do it in front of Abby!)

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